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We've all made them.
And they have some angsty terrible past.

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BRACE YOURSELVES, THIS IS A LONG ONE.
Here he is, one of my first ever original characters. His name was Artemis. Now, when I was a 6th grader, I had this story idea where I was the goddess of my own dimension and collected people from various worlds within the universes within the dimension, never mind that dimensions don’t work that way, and Artemis was one of them. His species had three fingers (this is an older picture, so he still has four), and were solid outer shell things filled with a sort of magic neural liquid that controlled the outer shell. said shell had progressively finer channels the way we have veins and capillaries. They were also generally inspired by various electronic devices of the mid-to-late 2000’s
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  Artemis was the crown prince from one of two royal families who had peacefully alternated rulers for years and he was based of of my first MP3 player, which was a Creative Muvo TX. You can see it in the design, if you look carefully -  his right eye is the pause/play button, the mark under it is the screen, the volume control buttons are on the shoulders of his shirt, and his goggles are actually the headphones that came with the Muvo. He was also a pop star and a med student, despite the fact that both require years of dedication.
  He and his siblings (a pair of twin younger siblings - the brother was based on a muvo TX FM my dad owned and the sister was based off my samsung juke) were on the run, because someone had assassinated his parents and wanted to kill him - notably, not the other royal family. They also cut off his hand in an attempt to drain him of all his fluidy insides, but he’d managed to cap the stump, and then make himself (or obtain) a prosthetic hand, which he could sort of control, but not with the same sensitivity because no one was able to carve in the necessarily mircoscopically small channels necessary.
  Artemis could fight with the scalpel spear pictured in the bottom left, as well as with this sword thing that had a large triangular blade on one end and a smaller dagger on the other, which he somehow controlled because a piece of its metal was embedded in his other wrist. He didn’t lose battles unless it was for dramatic effect, and despite being both a PRINCE and a POP STAR, people somehow never recognized him. Even with earlier designs where his facial marking could GLOW. he also didn’t have much of a personality apart from “responsible and respectful”, and again, was a special, handpicked chosen one of his even more sueish creator.

  I really liked the idea for artemis’s species, sans the electronic device part, and I honestly tried to retool him and his people countless times, but it never really worked out. I eventually just sort of locked him up and used bits and pieces of him for other characters, which is my standard protocol for shelved characters. maybe one day I’ll bring back his race, if not he himself.

I honestly have no idea what happened

can someone explain

I found this while going through the anime RP tag.

I THOUGHT THE SASUKE’S SISTER FAD WAS OVER

|| HARATSUKI UCHIHA  ||  19  ||

Age: 19
Birthday: November 8th
Height: 5’5”
Weight: 55kg/121lbs
Eye colour: Dark purple
Hair colour: Black
Clothing: Black tank tops. But she has recently stopped
wearing them and now wears whatever is in fashion. She
likes to wear Kimono’s as a sign of tradition. Other than that,
she doesn’t wear anything specific.

Haratsuki was born a year later after Itachi. They grew up together and cherished every moment they shared. By now, she was a Jounin and his older brother was part of the anbu. 
She packed her things and headed there to not only take a long trip away from her clan just to learn more about the Land of The Moon that she fell in love with when she found out about it. But when she came back, she found her family have died. Bear in mind that she left when Sasuke was just born. 
She hid and watched Itachi confront Sasuke. Before she could find out what happened afterwards, she fled. 

Now, she lives in Getsugakure. Located in the Land of The Moon. 
Although she does take visits to Konohagakure and other villages as she
likes to travel.

✓Positive traits 
Protective, independent, calm, courteous, honest, hardworking, friendly, 
kind (once she gets to know you better)

✘Negative traits 
Self-pity, manipulative, jealous, quick-temper, tsundere, mysterious, pessimistic, sad (more often than not)

Abilities/Career:

Former Anbu who has been reassigned as a Jonin.

Mangekyo Sharingan: Only recently learnt. Because of this,
her eyes will often bleed as a side effect. (The design for
her Sharingan is under development.)

Great Fireball Technique: A technique that most if not all
of the Uchiha clan know how to do. Even just by observation.

Manipulating Windmill Triple Blades: Strings attached to Kunai.
Similar to the concept of puppet strings. Only one kunai is used
to cause damage and the other two as decoys.

Uchiha Flame Formation: Used as a barrier/defense technique. 


Dance of the Crescent Moon: Two clones are made as to confuse the
victim of which one to attack. 

Hazy Moon Night: Basic sword attack but puts the opponent into 
a daze afterwards. Although when she taught this, she did not know
it was already a technique - as she already learnt this herself - and 
thus called it “Swift Sword”. But her instructor tells her to name it it’s
original name.

Shurikenjutsu: The throwing of blades.

Haratsuki was taught how to use weaponry and the art of the involvement
of the moon in her jutsu. She has also been taught fire related abilities.
But more often than not, she’d taught herself other techniques and is known in the village she lives in as making up her own.

Sakina Tess

Real Life Saki: Sakina Tess by SakiFuyumiOC

Name: 
Sakina Tess
Age:
16
Gender:
Female
National:
French
Personality:
She is sweet, caring and shy. When you first meet her, she is very quiet and kept to herself but get to know her and she becomes joyful. All the boys at her school things she’s the most prettiest girl in the school which makes her very shy and unsure around males. She has her own fan club and is normally freaked out but the members and would hide from them.
Crush:
She has a thing for Zenko Yamaguchi (Zen Yamada in the game) He is always doing things he shouldn’t and gets in trouble so she tries not show her feelings.
History:
Sakina lived in France with her twin sister and her parents until the age of 5. Her father got a new job in japan and they had to move there. At first in Japan, no one really liked her and she was picked on. One day a young boy name Zenko Yamaguchi stood up for her and kept her from getting hurt. The two of them became really close. In middle school, Zenko started getting in trouble and missed school a lot but at that time Sakina meet new people and made new friends. Her and Zenko were still close but he was never at school. In high school, Sakina started having a lot of guys flirt with her and would get scared. Zenko would always come to save her from the guys. A few months before Phalia Online came out, Sakina’s parents got into a car crash and died. She had a nervous break down and her Sister had to care for her. She missed a lot of school and when she came back, the Game had started. That’s when she made a new life for herself as a player of Phalia Online.

Yeah, this is a doozy that cropped up.

alright so…

recently, someone i watch on deviantART has been posting a comic involving canon characters, and her own OC, which is fine… except for the way she has her character.

to start off, this is a professor layton OC who’s name is wolf. yes. wolf. 

and of course, like all good sues, she has a thing going on with descole. she is apparently (because of this comic) now his ‘partner’ as in partner in crime. she was his apprentice, like luke is to the professor, but more of crime stuff.

you know what descole has? wolves. so why not name her wolf, because i dunno that makes perfect sense

anyway, she’s pretty annoying and her creator had her name as ‘erin’ something and also ‘alana’ and i am so confused on what her real name is.

also, before i actually get into my point about why she is a giant sue, i would also like to mention that the descole x wolf shipping is hinted at almost all the time, and wolf (like all the descole x oc sues) is only around 18-early 20s while descole (albeit he doesn’t look it) is early forties.

into what the problems.

in her most recent comic, wolf and descole and the butler (i think his name was raymond but i dont remember off the top of my head so i’ll just call him butler) are pretty like ‘let’s go after bronev’. the one character that everyone hated because HE HAS TOUCHED OUR PRECIOUS DESCOLE SO HE MUST PARISH

and of course, bronev is like ‘ayyyy’ and huge fight. wolf pretty much went ‘screw this’ and ran after bronev, and after descole and raymond move their slow asses to go get her, she’s been beat up by bronev. THIS is where the problems come in. (also would like to say, i would provide visuals but im posting this from my laptop which can’t really do much, but it’s actually decent art and it’s okay but the story went south.) bronev has a sword (he is not one of the only men in the series that uses a sword, by the way) and commence sword fight with descole, when bronev could have easier shot him and the butler, and wolf but no we must let them live. long story short, descole almost dies when wolf valiently sacrifices herself to save him and actually almost dies doing so

like this hasn’t happened plenty of times before with other sues

and then descoles pretty much going to try and avenge her death when, WHOOP-DE-DOO SHE’S NOT DEAD

WHO WOULD HAVE GUESSED IT

also would like to mention the fact that she got cut in the abdomen with a sword. a SWORD. and she lived through it.

so p much the butler’s like “shes alive” and they escape and a week later she wakes up and descole going in to see her and he was actually the reason she woke up bc of that one tear, and there’s the fact she’s not wearing a hospital gown because no, we must have bandaged boobs. hospitals gowns mean no fanservice. we can’t have that.

and she almost kisses him until the freaking butler shows up and thank god because too much pedophilia.

my question is

how did she live through all of this especially a freaking SWORD

WHY DID BRONEV NOT KILL THEM WHEN HE HAD THE CHANCE

WHY DOES WOLF NOT HAVE A ‘DRIP’ (idk what it’s actually called) OR HOSPITAL GOWN OR ANYTHING ACCURATE TO BEING IN A HOSPITAL

so many unanswered questions and so many comments like

"im so happy she lived" "why didnt descole kill bronev for wolf" and stuff

ugh

When I was 7 I made a Sonic OC… you know where this is going right…? Like most sonic OCs, he’s a recolor of an existing character

He basically shadow but white and blue and I had no idea what I was thinking back then but made him so over powered that he could basically face one of those god-monster things that super sonic fights even without the chaos emeralds and stuff.

I gave him all sorts of powers and I sorta regret making him that since, now that I think about it, if I put him in a sonic game, he would get boring to play as very quickly…

Another self-submit from my side.

When I was 12, I was a hardcore WWE fangirl. I adored Jeff Hardy and wrote fanfiction after every new episode of smackdown. He was the main protagonist, alongside with his current “enemies” and me. His girlfriend. My character was a blatant self insert, I didn’t even change my name or appearance , I just aged myself up. Of course everybody loved me, I won every match and never got in any trouble. 

I did not even invent own storylines. I just took what happened in an Episode,  wrote it down and put my angsty self somewhere in it.

After Jeff left the wwe , I just randomly got drafted into the men’s division, because I wasn’t like other girls, urgh.

Whenever this abomination falls into ma hamds I cringe, so take it and never give it back please.

this is a self-submit that i cant believe i didnt submit earlier

the character isnt really a fan character of any kind (though she did change whenever i joined a new fandom and/or got new clothes lmao) and is pretty much just a giant sue 

the text at the bottom thats cut off says “at first glance” btw

jesus christ this used to be my persona

let’s make a check-list shall we

  • werepire
  • demon
  • shinigami
  • shape-shifter (her cat hat changes animals to whatever she wants and she gains some phsyical resemblance to said animal so thats why she has cat ears/tail with the cat hat??? christ)
  • able to harness electricity
  • able to harness dark electricity?? whatever that is

apparently the amazing reasoning behind why this character had all these powers and abilities is b/c a wolf goddess was playing tricks on her and caused all of that to happen?????

the original story was that she was just a normal orphan girl whose parents died on a trip to paris in a plane accident and she lived alone in a cabin in the woods and just drew all day and surfed the internet i guess??  but she was also part of this teen organization that fought crime and hunted down murderers and i dont understand anymore

anyway she had this wish journal right.  she wrote in it one day that she wished her characters would come to life b/c she was lonely and she also wished she was a werepire for SOME REASON

this wolf appeared in her yard and she followed it ??? and she came to a meadow where the wolf disappeared and one of her characters was in the field and was like “hey” and then she went home and all her other characters were there suddenly and shes like holy shit

the rest of the story is weird b/c this dude apparently cloned one of her characters b/c he wanted a son and he died and the clone turned evil and cloned all her characters to make this clone army and the whole story was just so elaborate and i cant believe i put so much time into it /i literally wrote a novel revolving around this character/

not to mention this character was practically a self-insert of me into my own fictional world (no canon characters in there, just…hundreds of ocs that all lived in the same house) and she changed whenever i did?? shes not my persona anymore and thank god i dont draw like that anymore too but shes still an oc of mine that im very fond of (and ive taken away almost all of those abilities and reverted her back to her original abilities which was just shapeshifting to go with the story OTL her gender’s even changed too)

i think the worst part (besides the top-heavy werewolf form and the unbelievable amount of shit to go with her) was the description on dA:

GOOOOOGGGGG this took FOREVUURRRR…

…and it’s SO HUGE. >:U

Eh.

This is a reference for my persona, Nat Vladimira. I hope she’s not forgotten already. X’D

l’I

… Anyway…

The words cut off at the bottom say “first glance.” Not very much else to say here.

The cat form she has is just a general animal form. For all her forms, the markings and accessories are the same.

BEFORE YOU SAY ANYTHING, the reason she has all this crap to do with her species and attributes is due to the fact that a wolf goddess was messing with her and gave her the powers/abilities/traits. This caame from an attempted novel that I am currently -attempting- to rewrite. 

So… Ja…”

im so sorry you had to read that

so in summary nat vladimira was a terrible terrible sue but ive made her better and i still love her to death even with that terrible terrible history o/ glad i could share her with u

My First Mary Sue

Ok so, when I was about seven or eight, my brother and I were introduced to the LEGO Bionicle toys and comic, which was basically about the Toa, robots with elemental powers, saving the world. There was a lot of lore and mythology to it, and I loved it to pieces. Naturally, I wanted to insert myself into such a fantastic story and made up a character to do just that. I didn’t write anything down or draw anything about her, possibly because I was embarrassed of her even then, likely because that would be work and I was a lazy little rugrat, so I’m just saying what I can remember.

Her name was Ashleya (My name with an ‘a’ on the end - so clever!). She was a human kid in a world with absolutely no humans or humanlike creatures to be found - though in fairness, at the time I didn’t see any evidence that the island the story took place on just didn’t have any humans on it, but there were humans elsewhere. She traveled around with the Toa on their very dangerous missions, despite being a kid, and all of them openly loved and doted on her like an adorable little sister, even though some of them have trouble expressing anything other than deep dislike to anyone.

She was absurdly powerful. She could copy anyone’s powers by thinking of them, though the only time I specifically remember her using it is one time she failed at it and everyone got their asses kicked like in canon.

Her story was the main antagonists of the arc where I got into the story were holding her prisoner, and she got free when the Toa were fighting them. There was no explanation for how where she came from or how she got her powers.

Also she could surf on lava.

flipnote sue

^ this Oc is an Mew/pachirisu mix with an evil twin whos name in the ocs name backwards with an evil side called dark twix hmm SHE ALSO HAS WINGS good art but take away the wings

Mm so this fantroll is basically Aradia with a different name also she is shipped with Sollux

my fantroll!!!! by Sugoi-Desu-Ham

my fantrol!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :33 this is her catform btww

ok but i should probz add some informatino on her lolz =^.^=

okay her name is candy makara. her last name is like dat because shes married 2 gamzee markara :3 her brother is karkat and hes REEEEALLY protective and doesnt approve of their marriage! :( he trys to talk her out of being with him!! her bff is kanaya and they like to go shoping together al the time! her worst enemy is vriska! they HATE eachother!! once in a fyte, candy ripped vriskas arm off (robot arm!!) and she plucket out her majic eye. but she deserved it because she killed tavros!! she has rainbow blood. shes the only troll on earth that has it!!! its really special so PLEEEASE dont steal my idea plz :(
her quirk is like this;
":3)<i love you gamzee!!"

ill post her normal form soon! maybe tomorrow lolz

she has 3 dream forms. prospit, derce, and another world wich SHE CREATED!! they have rainbow colored outfits (it goes wit her blood!)

she also has an evil form that only cums out wen someone is being REALLY mean!!!!!! like trolls. sometimes she tastes gamzees faygo and goes insane!!! and then she LIKE THIS, WITH JUST BIG LETTERS BECAUSE SHES REALLY MAD AND BLOODTHIRSTY!!

I’m sure this is a joke troll

SnK OC - Ivan Schneider

Remember that atrocity Lena Schneider? Well this is her brother, and boy oh boy, it’s just as bad as the other one, if not worse. As usual, my comments are in bold.

Birthday
22nd July

Nationality
German-Russian

Personality
Humanity’s laziest. First procrastinator, couch potato and biggest baby in Scouting Legion. He hates working and doing anything that won’t result in any profit for him. Noisy and annoying, likes to be in centre of everything. Stupid pranks and rude comments are Ivan’s trademarks. On the other hand he is very charismatic and great at leading people; natural born commander. I’m calling bullshit, and let me tell you why. Because nobody is going to follow a lazy person into combat. Nobody. And no, you cannot just go from being the laziest, couch potato who procrastinates doing things he doesn’t want to do to being a charismatic, natural born commander. This doesn’t work. You said it yourself, he’s the biggest baby in the Scouting Legion, and in order to be a Commander you need to be mature and be able to show other people that you are worth following. Sorry, this just doesn’t work.
When working, Ivan likes to work with people - he hates being alone. Usually doing some physical trainings or other activities since he can’t stand “brain-thingies”. Who even wants to work with him when he’s rude and pulls pranks on people? Who even takes him seriously when he’s lazy and a big baby? Ivan can be also grumpy and sad, but it’s a really rare event for the man. Then why even put this in here when it’s a rare thing? You’re only supposed to put relevant information on the character sheet.

Okay, let me break this down for those of you folks who aren’t going to survive until the very end. He is Humanity’s Laziest, yet all his stats – except for his intelligence – are at 9s and 10s. This is Humanity’s Laziest. He also wants to be the next Commander of the Scouting Legion, yet the author states that “he hates working and doing anything that won’t result in any profit for him”. Tell me something, how is joining the Scouting Legion and becoming Commander going to profit you at all? It’s full of danger and hard work, all the things Ivan hates. And he’s the biggest baby in the Scouting Legion, correct? Why even go into the Scouting Legion if you don’t like hard work and are a big baby? Why not go into the Garrison?

 Background
Ivan is one of the Schneider twins - Lions from North - son of an aristocrat from King’s surroundings and a high priest. Both of them, alongside with their distant cousin, Dimitri, lived good and decent life behind Wall Sina, until a certain accident. When he was 7 years old he was abducted with his sister and cousin, as well as with other children from each Wall. They were held in some kind of underground laboratory. Cruel experiments and genetic changes, caused them a lot of painful memories and phobias. Except of course because your OCs are just so perfect they never ever experience these traumas. Let me tell you something: YOU ARE BEING OFFENSIVE TO LITERALLY EVERYBODY WITH PTSD. Especially since they were children who were subjected to cruel torture! They would not be okay! They would be mentally unsound and be unable to trust anybody! They’d be paranoid! They’d have issues dealing with their emotions! They’d have flashbacks and nightmares and phobias! You cannot get rid of PTSD in no time at all! Some people never get better! JUST STOP. After a year of searching his parents finally managed to rescue all of the children. In a year, you say. I doubt if this were a covert operation that their parents would be able to find them in a year. Some of them were already dead, in result of the experiments. Higher-ups covered up this accident, but it still remains in hearts of the rescued kids. The experiments were conducted by army to create a new type of titans, that could control others and wouldn’t kill people. They were named the Berserkers. Only a few of them were considered successful, beside them Ivan, whose operation codename was “Kérberos”. 
Unlike Lena, Ivan didn’t become so obsessed with revenge on those who conducted experiments. But he still wanted to punish them at any cost. Do you realize how much of a contradiction this is? He wasn’t obsessed with revenge, but he wanted to punish them at any cost. You are literally saying he is obsessed with revenge. After a few years of rehabilitation and peace, he decided to join the army with other Berserkers. They could reach the King’s surroundings through well passed exams and promotions, and kill anyone that was responsible for their tragedy. In the end, Ivan didn’t make it to Military Police and joined Scouting Legion instead. I’m just wondering how he didn’t make it into the Military Police when his stats are so high.
With his friends, he finally discovered the truth behind the experiments and as well as their goal - the Berserkers where just a half product. The goal was to create an ideal titan being, called now the Neo Berserker that was supposed to be used in coup d’etat and abolition of the King. Again, it is still never explained who these higher-ups were and why they were doing this. Do you realize that you are treating your readers as if they are stupid by assuming they will believe this? The higher-ups already have power, what reason do they have for trying to take down the monarchy and the powerful people in society? And besides if you read the manga (which I’m sure you haven’t) you’d know that the King is just a figurehead, and all of his decisions are influenced by aristocrats and the Wallists anyways. So they literally have no reason to try and take out the “higher-ups”.  Both Schneiders and other Berserkers decided, that they will do everything they can to stop that faceless organization from taking over the reign and then fulfil their personal revenge.

Now that the most recent chapter of the manga has come out, let me tell you a thing. Humans/titans are not turned into shifters by a serum. This should probably be amended in my previous critique. They are turned into shifters by eating a shifter. Therefore it is literally impossible for these scientists to turn these children into shifters.

 Reasons
The main reason Ivan joined the army is the same as his sister’s: to carry out revenge on the organization and higher-ups responsible for the experiments that ruined their lives. But after realising the real goal of creating Berserkers, he decided to protect the kingdom first. Joining Scouting Legion was not planned and made a few complications with the whole thing, but in the end they accepted it as a good thing – Ivan could keep a close eye on titans inside and outside the Walls and make reports about their unusual behavior at first hand.

Why did he even bother joining the Scouting Legion if he’s lazy and a big baby? Why does he wanna become Commander when being mature and having a strong personality are two traits that are absolutely necessary for becoming Commander? There is literally no benefit to being Commander. Have you read the manga? Do you see what Erwin Smith has to deal with all the time? I highly doubt a lazy, baby couch potato can handle what Erwin Smith has to.

 Goals
Ivan’s goals are simple. Taking revenge and protect his family from all evil. He strikes for the position of the next commander of Scouting Legion. He also jokes that he wants to be the next King.

You said Ivan is not as obsessed with revenge as his sister. Yet his main reason for joining the military is revenge, and the first thing you list in his goals is taking revenge. In the last sentence of his history you state he wants to “fulfill personal revenge”. Yeah, right, not as obsessed as his sister you say. Did you actually read what you wrote before you posted it online?

 Statistics
Intelligence - 4/10
Social Skill - 10/10
Vitality - 9/10
Speed - 10/10
Battle Skill - 9/10

While your entire personality is full of flaws, I still say he’s too overpowered. For somebody who’s super annoying and rude and likes to pull pranks, wouldn’t his social skill be lower? And if he’s lazy why are his battle skill and speed so high? He’d procrastinate doing any sort of work.

 Likes/Dislikes
Ivan loves to be the leader in everything, mint candies, flirting and fighting.
He dislikes being alone, working, liars and noisy people similar to him.

 Habits
Making jokes, sleeping, smoking cigarettes, eating candies.

Wow, so original. Having one sibling the exact opposite of the other. You do realize that siblings usually end up sharing some similar traits because they both come from the same two people, right? Unless Lena and Ivan are in no way blood related. But honestly, everybody does the whole “siblings who are opposites” thing. Why not go for something more original?

 Other
- His full name is “Ivan Octavian Caspar Schneider”. Why such a long name? It’s honestly so unnecessary.
- Ivan is a Berserker by name of ” Kérberos “. He was rejected as Neo Berserker because he cannot use his power when he wants (has problems in changing into titan form).
- He has two tattoos of lion’s head on his hands. This is such weak symbolism. A lion represents fierceness, bravery, and regality. Your character represents none of these traits. Try going for a potato instead. Unless of course you’re going for the fact that male lions are lazy and don’t do anything, then this symbolism is perfect for him. But you should probably explain that.
- Ivan uses a special type of blades for fighting, designed by his sister. I’m sorry, but you cannot do this. There are standard issued blades for a reason. If he doesn’t like following the rules then he shouldn’t be part of the military.
- He admires his mother greatly. When you add a trait to a character it should usually come with a “why”. I read the backstory and tried to see why he would admire his mother, but I don’t see any reason to. Unless this goes back to him being a “big baby” and he’s a momma’s boy.

 Overall

This girl’s two Naruto OC’s (even though they look the same) Saiyuki Uchiha and Johanna Hitomè, with Eren and Levi from SNK…