Now, I know Hetalia does not have the best fan-reputation in general but…this is probably the worst one I’ve ever seen. I wish I could include more than one pic in a submission because she has pleeeeeenty of bad base-art in her DeviantART to showcase but the above one will do. I did once give her a polite critique on her DA and told her I think the OC has Mary Sue traits, her response was something like “Sorry you think she’s a sue, she does have some flaws” and listed things like trusting people too easily, naivete, not making up her mind, and “SHE HAS APARAGUSES.”
I don’t know if the last counts as a flaw because she gave no visible or even mental signs of being troubled by “Aparaguses”.
Please be aware the “Backstory” section below is literally a summarized version of the OC’s first fanfic. The fanfic itself had 3 chapters, all of which were ONE single, monstrous paragraph with the same standard of writing as seen in these below descriptions. She also VERY blatantly made every male canon character be in love with her/the self-insert/the OC and would skip no opportunities to remind us of this.
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backstory Serenia’s human name is Kaitlyn-Amethyst.Water lily and originally age 15. the back story on her is that she was a girl from our world but was transported to the hetalia world by a unknown person. she was sent there after wishing to save the life of the holy roman empire only thinking that it’s only a wish that would be impossible to come ture. when her wish was granted she was knocked out and when she woke up she was a 15 year old girl in a four year old girls body. she was found by Austria and taken into his home to be looked after in exchange for her to be a maid along with Feliciano A.K.A Italy. she saved holy roman empire by lying to him saying she can see the future he bought it and was saved. she traveled across the land after staying at austria’s home for 210 years then leveing for he land, Serenia. on the way she met little romano and Spain, then went on to meeting Arthur A.K.A England and little Australia and little America. she went through hard what whit the bombing of her country, she abandoned her pasifistways and embraced the fighter spirit with open arms. when she when to look for survivors she found 2 wolf cubs and 2 snow tiger she took them in as her own. after she was in isolation for a short period of time but found bye her good old friend Australia and taken to a world meeting to find out which country bombed hers. finding out it was switzerland she made a threat for him to call off the war on her country, switzerland called off his troops, after that she joined the allies.
Kaitlyn is a strong willed girl with a kick ass adittude she can defend herself and protect others, however underneath her kick ass adittude she’s as soft as a rose petal. she loves every animal and is known in her own language, Serenian ‘nemara lillian hihn kiena’ to translate the angel of light. she is very friendly and can make friends fairly easly but, that’s depending on who the person is. she has the strength of russia and america put together when mad and/or needed to fight but the kindness and motherly additued when someone with a childs inoccents A.K.A italy. she cares for her friend like they were her own family
september 1st. since serenia was fonded on september 1st 1500 and because the country had beautiful flower and animals it was originally going to be called ‘Gardenia’ however, the founder barnabey clay woth (made up person) traveled the area more he described it as a heavenly place thus calling it Serenia
family brothers: Arthur, Alistor, Jack, Cole and Peter Kirkland
her pets were the 2 wolf and 2 snow tiger cubs:
Kilala: the white female wolf with a black cresent moon birthmark in the middle of her forhead andamber eyes.
Nomura: the black male wolf with emerald green eyes.
Herona: the male snow tiger with silver eyes.
Sesa: a black female snow tiger with white strips, a white cresent moon birthmark in the middle of her forhead
however, after the pictonians she lost the pets to them and later rescued a stary cat with dark brown fur and brown eyes. Kaitlyn calls her little angel but, the other cats know her as Serenicat.
Serenia can preform magic like her brother, Arthur and can see magical creatures.
serenia can’t decied who she is in love with but maybe in love with a 2p. her eyes turn emerald green like her brothers when she is in full rage using her magic and/or using her magic at maximum power
her magic comes out in a white glow hence why she is called the angel of light.
she is part of one of her countryies myths about a spirit of light and a child who was found in a blue flower, apparently she was the child.