Those flawless, beautiful characters. Everyone is in love with them.
We've all made them.
And they have some angsty terrible past.
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I wouldn’t normal do this type of thing since I don’t believe any OC is a Mary Sue/Gray Sue, but this one drives me nuts since the creator is going to apparently make Rogue go OOC just for her “yandere” character name Akki.
There is nothing in the details of the image and she has deleted the images of her OCs from her account after getting upset from someone on deviantART, deleted her account, and than came back. -_- The creator is nothing, but drama, but we’re not getting into that.
Akki is her Mary Sue that was originally creator by Tartarus, I think is the dark guilds name, for some reason that I don’t remember. However, this OC I know is suppose to be a “yandere”, but this character loves to kill no matter what.
Definition of a Yandere:
A common term in otaku fandom, a yandere is a person (usually female) romantically obsessed with someone to the point of using violent means to get them in their arms. Often seen with a sharp weapon and a psychotic grin.
If I remember, a true yandere does not enjoy killing, they just kill to get the one the love and to keep the one they love. They don’t love to kill like Akki does.
Also, the creator is doing a pairing contest where it is her OCxher OC, CanonxOC, or love triangle using both her two OCs and Rogue.
First off, Rogue wouldn’t have any interest in character like Akki. -_- Secondly, you make him totally go OOC with doing a love triangle. I really seriously think either this creator needs to stick with pairing her OCs with herself or with her friends and leave canons out of it because she is trying to change personalities to fit what she wants or she should just stick with what she said by deleting all her OCs and starting over. One of those would be the best. -_-
Trilia is frm the same clan as Sasuke (Uchiha) and uses the same jutsu as him, sharingan ^^ That’s why her eyes are red
OMG!, It’s another Uchiha Clan member. I bet later on she becomes Sasuke’s sister. -_- Also, she can’t come from the same clan with a different last name, plus the only two Uchiha’s that were alive for the longest time was Itachi and Sasuke, but now Sasuke is the only one alive!!! Just stop with this madness with coming up with Uchiha Clan members. -_- You take away from Sasuke and Itachi if there is any!!!
Trilia and Stara’s third teammate. She’s from the Hyuuga clan just like Hinata and Neji and uses the same Jutsu they do ^^ That’s why her eyes are white.
No, she can’t use the same jutsu as them and she can’t be with that hair!!! Hyuuga’s have black hair!!! Good, I hate sue artist like this.
First off, this girl that keeps coming up with these OCs likes to steal other peoples OCs, change a few things about them, and than make what was an OC into a Mary Sue. Someone give this kid some help since she wants to be mean to others.
Teammate of Trilia and Silver. :3 She can use the same Jutsu Naruto uses.
She can’t have the same jutsu as Naruto because it would take away from him. -_- Your as bad as the ones that make Naruto’s sister.
Sorry, for bring this Pokemon Sue up but it has really bother me along with some of my friends.
Made on Rinmaru ^^
Maria comes from a very wealthy family but is very weak and has poor eyesight. she has always wanted to become a Pokemon trainer but her family has forbid her from doing so. She runs away to begin her journey!
Pokemon she has:
the future I think I’m gonna make her kind of supernatural and she has psychic abilities a bit that helps her see and get through her days ^^ or maybe her Pokemon help her with it. not sure yet
Just no. Don’t even plan on bring psychic abilities to your sue. The only person in Pokemon I know of that had psychic abilities was Sabrina from a Psychic Pokemon Gym in the original series. You would just take away everything that character was. Infact, don’t give her any abilities at all. She isn’t a Pokemon unless she is mixed, but that would be impossible!!!
Ahhh Hello people. I’d uh like to share with you my Gary Stu… Yeah….
Meet Faust everybody. He was an Xiaolin Showdown OC and he was the dragon of fate.
Ok I made him before I understood history. If I had made him historically accurate this guy would have been a Keltoi: Ancestors of the Celts whose men filed their teeth into points and died their bodies blue or green.
Yeah this pretty boy is Faust and he somehow made it from central Europe to china. I think I had it so that Dojo could sense his powers and came to take him away after Greeks destroyed his village.
Which he totally saw coming by the way because GUESS WHAT? As the dragon of fate he could SEE THE FUTURE HAHAH.
He was the inspiration for the Crystal Glasses Shen Gong Wu
Can’t you see the similarity?
Anyways back to business, he, like all other dragons of fate had the responsibility to make sure that the Heylin and Xiaolin side remained balanced. He was very close to Dashi, Guan, and Chase and Chase taught him chinese which he never really picked up too well.
He ended up dying saving Chase from Wuya. and that’s why Chase chose evil. Wow, thanks Faust, not only is your name unrealistic but you completely undermined Chase’s personality.
Oh let’s not forget that he was the one who taught Guan how to properly yell at people because he was always angry. Remind me why people liked you again? Oh that’s right there was no reason. They just did.
Oh I was so young back then.
This is Nanase Uzumaki.
She is daughter of Naruto, The fox and Hanon, Aqua Pearl Voice.
I draw a OC. She is Hanon and Naruto’s Oldest Daughter.
here is her
Birth : 2nd May.
Parents : Naurto Uzumaki and Hanon Hosho.
Love Interest : None.
Farvorite Food : Steam Buns, Sushi and Ice Cream.
Weapon : Mixture of Schyte and Rod.
Song : Ever Blue.
Likes : Her Parents, Kakashi, Singing and Using Her Ice Power.
Dislikes : Chaos, gagging, Villains, Water Demons.
Force : Stronger like garuda.
Hanon is From Mermaid Melody. and Naruto from Naruto Shippuden.
Nanase Uzumaki Hosho is Her Full Name.
her name, Nanase was named after Hokuto and Kairi’s Younger Sister from Street Fighter EX.
Hanon Hosho © Pink Hanamori
Naruto Uzumaki © Masashi Kishimoto
Nanase Uzumaki © me
This is Artwork.
Ask me a request.
Pokemon OCs!!!! I love em all eeee!
Admorphite is the youngest. Her parents hated her so she was told to carry an everstone,lied to and told it would bring her good luck.
Glimmer is not really an eeveelution nor umbreon. She was made in Team Rockets lab and tested on. She escaped one day with a couple other experiments and adopted into this family.
Wanna-Be was never liked. He was outcasted and hated by his mother and father. For the longest time no one loved him,until Admorphite came along. She was hated as well and the two were always the best of friends.
Blaze is the eldest and snottiest. He’s always been an example. “Why can’t you be more like Blaze?” “Blaze is better!” “You’re useless! The only good one around here is Blaze!” But,when he met a young and scared vulpix,he fell in love. The two couldn’t be a happier couple.
Mist is the most playful of this bunch. She doesn’t care much for her parents or siblings,she just likes jokes. She’s always pranking Flame and always teasing Wanna-Be.
Hey, anon who asked if we could submit fanfiction chapters here. These are the highlights from the first chapter of a fanfiction by some person on fanfiction.net, starring herself, N, and an extremely OOC set of characters. There was sadly no real profile, so I hope this is acceptable. I tried to cut it down as much as I could, but it’s still really long.
Hi, I’m Sparkle Armida Violet Galactia-Harmonia. As in, my dad is Cyrus and I’m married to N. This is my Umbreon Luna, and my many ribbons and trophies from my extensive contest career. Huh… you wanna know how I got this scar on my neck? Well, I guess I’d better start at the beginning. You might want to get comfortable because this is a very long story. It was a bright but chilly autumn day, in my fourth period science class…
So already this is…questionable. Cyrus doesn’t have a surname in canon, and if he did it probably wouldn’t be ‘Galactica’. Also, why the hell is her name so long? And why the fuck would Cyrus name his child ‘Sparkle’? She’s also married to N, and is some sort of brilliant coordinator, and from normal Earth.
I hate to say it, but it only gets worse.
Yes, I know my name isn’t REALLY Sparkle, but I’m trying to distance myself from society and normality. But they still lock me up here for my daily six hours of brainwashing, or education as they call it. I call it boring.
Okay, so it’s one of those, is it?
I can gossip with the best of them, and I got a ninety eight percent on a geometry test seventy percent of the class failed, but I honestly don’t care! My true colors are for few to see. Few meaning NO ONE!
I believe this paragraph speaks for itself.
At least I don’t go out drinking and driving. If society had more people like me, we wouldn’t be in debt; children would be taking advanced geometry in fourth grade, and would be working and contributing to society by thirteen. Not wasting our lives writing essays and living in whatever colorless box society dictates we fit into as teens.
No, if society had more people like you we’d be spending all our resources trying to build a portal to the pokémon world instead of, I dunno, something actually worthwhile.
Also, psychiatrists would be in much, much higher demand.
I have the greatest mom ever and I HATE it. All I ask of her is acceptance of my fandom, and alone time for Fanfictions. What do I get? Popularity, expensive clothes, and everything a girl could want.
Wow. Just wow. Do you know how many people would kill for a mom like that?
Also, acceptance of your fandom and time to write fanfictions can totally go together with your mom buying you stuff.
I’m combat boots (okay, everyone wears them, but I like them too.) black jeggings, purple tank tops and gray crop tops! Not slippers, yoga pants, 70$ jackets and a Starbucks cup. I don’t even LIKE coffee! If I need caffeine, coke cherry zero from a vending machine will suffice.
And…who’s putting who in a box now? Because it sounds to me like she’s stereotyping the entire teenage female population of America. Also, ‘coke cherry zero’?
"Yeah, just no ideas. The main character just fell off a cliff and is in a coma, while her boyfriend’s brother is secretly in cahoots with the evil dude and she is the only one who knows. Not sure whether to have her wake up first or have him kidnap his step-mother." Rachel giggles, "your stories don’t even sound like Fanfictions the way you describe them!
Yeah, they sound like some vague melodramatic plot you pulled out of your ass. Also, I’m pretty sure a dive off a cliff would do more than make you comatose.
The trail he takes is a simple one, down past my high-school, almost to my old middle school, and into the woods in between. Now I’ve never been in those particular woods. I have a good reason too. A forest between two schools? Drugs are a huge possibility. Yes I’m a goody-goody who fears everything
Apparently goody-goodies think of the educational system as brainwashing. This character is just so full of contradictions.
Cyrus sighs, running a hand through his hair, “Her name was… well her name was Sparkle. She was my only daughter, and people from this dimension took her as a baby. I don’t know why they wanted her, but she HAS to be alive. I’m not going to believe that she is… dead.” He chokes out the last word in a flurry of emotion like I’ve never seen from him. Who knew this guy had a soft side?
Cyrus, the dude who wanted to ELIMINATE ALL EMOTIONS, everyone.
She’s wearing skinny jeans and… combat boots.
Because taste in shoes indicates relation by blood.
I look up, and he’s holding colored contacts; his eyes are actually green.
…was there a point to that? Did she just want to prove that canon is hers to tear apart or something?
I see where I get my attitude. I’m surprised I didn’t see this coming.
If you see any similarities between your attitude and Cyrus’ then you probably need professional help.
His bright green eyes almost tear up, but he pulls himself together. I pull him into a hug, “I love you too dad.”
This is so OOC I can’t even…this isn’t Cyrus. At all.
"What are you doing here?" I ask. "Well miss conspiracy theory, what do you think?"
How does this dude who just met her know everything about her? And when were conspiracy theories ever mentioned?
"I’m your half-brother. Dad cheated on my mom about fourteen years ago, the marriage still stands. Somehow you’ve always been his favorite."
If you’re wondering who this is, it’s fucking PAUL. That’s right, Paul from the anime. And he’s apparently Cyrus’ son.
"I can see why you feel that way. By the fact that you couldn’t even watch your Umbreon take a hit, you seem like the type." I bite my lip, "You say it like it’s a bad thing."
"it’s not, but it is. You’re very nice, and Luna already loves you. But, you fear battles. That could hinder you. If I were to suggest a career move, I’d say coordinator." I nod, "That’s actually what I was thinking!" Paul smiles a bit, "Well, you’ll be good at it. I saw your trick to make sure Charm hits every time, that’s really smart." But his eyes look distant, "Even so, you need to be careful, not everything in this world is how they portrayed it there."
This is Paul talking. So OOC that he’s unrecognizable, as is the standard with this suethor.
"Ash… he taught me so many things. It wouldn’t be a stretch to say I feel like I’m in the presence of a genius when he’s around. But don’t tell anyone!"
Paul, why are you so OOC? Why are you calling Ash a genius? You should be the last person to ever do that. Why, Paul? Why?
Comashipping is canon, I knew it!
I’m not sure you know what ‘canon’ means.
On that note, chapter one is done. As much as I’d like to read the other 14 chapters, I don’t think my brain cells can handle it.
Sorry for clogging up your inbox with this fanfic chapter, there was no real profile. If there was, I would have sent that.
Self Submission! I was super proud of this super cringy oc.
Her Name was Kiara Uchiha and a lost, seperated sister/ relative of Sasuke??? She was orphaned as a baby and raised by a black dog until she was five.
Kiara was perfect at art and found out about ninja school at some point, where she was a real emo gurl until she found her first friend.
That friend ended up being her girlfriend, and they lived in a shitty house together where the Akatsuki showed up and wanted Kiara to join because she had the Sharingan and also she could control blood and had some other superpowers. Oh, did I mention she was already Chuunin after a year or faster. So, her GF was against it so Kiara killed her and joined the Akatsuki. She was in a Team with Zetsu i guess.
After that she fell in love with Deidara and they loved each other. She eventually got pregnant with his baby, they left the Akatsuki (how???) BUT the baby died inside her and she almost died of blood loss too. Way to go, she got really depressed afterwards so she had to go to therapy and her doctor raped her. (I was a sick kid) THEN she got transferred to some psycho clinic where she had to spend 4 years but they let her out earlier bc she missed Deidara too much??
Also Deidara and her lived in some huge kickass Villa the whole time, and she practiced her bloodbending stuff secretly at night… i thin she could controll others when her blood was on them, and she could turn water into blood. makes a lot of sense, yeah. at least to 12 year old me it made sense…
and i remember there was some tragic story part about her and some white cat, the cat got bombed at some part.
I used to fight about deidaras love with some other kids on deviantart, looking back i am ashamed
BEST PART - my Deidara ship thing even got fanart! :’D so hilarious oh god
I reviewed a terrible AoT OC. here she is.
Name: Cierra Ackerman Wait… you mean…
Maiden Name: Cierra Knightly
Meaning: Meaning ‘dark-haired’ from the Irish origins and ‘mountain range’ from the English origin. Alright, good start.
Nickname(s):Cici also known as the Blue Princess throughout the 104th trainee squad.
Alias (if any): N/A
Age: Female Titan Arc: 20
Birthday: Dec. 15th
Birthplace: Wall Maria.
Current Residence: Wall Rose/Sina
Sexual Orientation: straight
Marital Status: Married to who?
Language(s) spoken: English
Life-Long Dream: To see the ocean. (Heard it in a rumor.)
Goal(s): To survive life only, but learned an important lesson to die for comrades.
Affiliation: Scouting Legion
Former Affiliation: N/A
Grad. Rank: below the top 10.
Like(s): Levi, Love, mother, drawing, reading. no..god please no…
Dislike(s): Insects and sour food.
Bad Habit(s): Being a bit selfish and rude, gets drunk.
Hobbies: Drawing, reading.
Fear(s): Losing her loved ones.
Personality: Cierra turns out to be shy and quiet because of her tormenting past. She was kicked around and abused by her family members due to running away countless of times from home because she did not want to get married. When things were serious, she’d do anything so survive. She’s strong and bold in the inside, but outside she seems weak and small. After the female Titan arc, she trys more to show her true self. Cierra also can be very rude. She sometimes may tend to make rude remarks if it has to be said. When she does, it’s quite a surprise to her comrades.
Favorites (not necessary)-
Food(s): Burgers. (Any type.)
Time of Day: Doesn’t mind~
Weight: 87. (Pounds.) that’s not a very healthy weight…
Hair style: Always down.
Hair Color: Dark Brown
Eye Color: Light brown. (I changed it XD)
Skin Tone: Fair
Body Shape/Build: Petite/ hint of hourglass figure.
Birth Marks: N/A
Scar(s): She has one on her left shoulder, across the stomach, and one across her right cheek and one on her forehead.
Memory (any issues with this?): No Issue.
Sight (do you need glasses?): No.
Mental (Any problems? Example: depression): No.
Physical (Do you take care of your body or harm it? Also include injuries): No. But did get broken ribs once. wat?
Sleep patterns (how you sleep and how much rest do you get?): Sleeps okay, unless on a mission.
Abilities/Statistics (1- lowly skilled, 10- highly skilled and tell why)-
3D Maneuvering Gear: 7/10 Cierra learned to use it properly by Levi and is able to use it well.
Intelligence: 8/10 Cierra is able to think clearly and make good reasons and plans.
Martial Arts: 6/10 Cierra has a small, light body so that come into a disadvantage of strength but advantage of moving and dodging quickly.
Battle Skill: 8/10
Agility: 8/10 Because of her petite, light body. Also she is anorexic.
Teamwork: 9/10 she loves to do teamwork then work solo.
Parent(s): Ami Knightly, Ronald Knightly
Sibling(s): 3 older brother’s. Deceased.
Other Relative(s): She has a few cousins, uncles, aunts she knows of but doesn’t know of their whereabouts.
Best Friend(s): Jean
Friend(s): Mikasa, Eren, Armin, Krista, Sasha, Hanji-san, Erwin.
Hero(es): Levi, Eren later on…
History/Life: Cierra was born into a high class family. She was born to Ami and Ronald Knightly. Somehow the children the couple got turned out to have a disease. WORK ON YOUR FUCKING GRAMMAR WOMAN. Because of this, they never got married. But then it was later on changed when Levi’s father killed Ronald’s brother when they got into a fight, Ronald made him pay back for he did by saying his baby boy, Levi, will marry the daughter born to the Knightly Family.nonononono NO! Levi’s father agreed to it, no matter how old Levi would be or the daughter born into the Knightly family. If she held a disease or not, they will get married. It was until Cierra began to grow, she learned from her parents she wasn’t to like any boy because her husband had been decided long ago. because of this, she escaped her home various times until her uncles had her locked up in the basement and abused her. Angst, man…
Levi was captured from his underground home and was forced to join the Scouting Legion. No… He remembered his father saying he’s supposed to marry the Knightly family’s daughter but Levi didn’t know who they were or where to find them and ignored the memory playing in his head. It was until he came back from a mission, some men grabbed him from the place we was currently staying in and took him to the Knightly family’s home basement for Levi to finally get married to Cierra. If he declined, both of them were to be killed. Levi’s opinion was on Cierra, if she wanted to marry or not. Cierra said she wanted to be anywhere but the place she was currently at and Levi agreed marrying her. After they got married, they both lived in separate places. (Levi stayed within Wall Maria while Cierra stayed in the ShiganShina district.) When the titans attacked, Cierra was able to escape easily while her mother was left behind, probably killed. When she arrived within Wall Rose, she asked everyone around for Levi. Levi found her, and had Hanji put in charge of her.
Cierra joined the 104th trainee’s squad and joined the survey corpse. She wanted to see the beauty of the outside world and the massive water land called the ‘ocean.’ She made friends and went on her first mission. (Female titan arc.) Cierra became a stronger person and was sure once in her lifetime she would be able to see the true beauty of the outside world.
Well… what can I say… THIS OC IS AWFUL. WHY WOULD SHE BE THIS FUCKING TERRIBLE? This is just…I don’t know anymore… ‘scuse me while I go jump out a window.
I don’t know or understand what happen to this OC in the Zen Yamada one, but I thought awhile back they were okay OCs. I stopped following the creator a year ago because of some drama she posted on her original account. Well, I decided to look for the OCs again because I did love them and didn’t want the owners bs keeping me from that. Found out that the owner has totally change Saki and wants to make her a Yandere, she also changed her magic to Cherry Blossom God Slayer. -_- I have now also seen where this OC was on the line of being a Mary Sue to now being a full blown Mary Sue. I even see that all her OCs have become Mary/Gray Sues.
I think if she hadn’t made the changes that she has to her first OCs and only stuck to them instead of creating more just to pair them she wouldn’t have become a Mary Sue/Gray Sue artist.
I’ve now lost any love I had for Saki and Zen and hope the Sue Artist realizes her error.
( I was looking at Marvel OCs on deviantArt when I found this gem. It’s nothing short of creepy. )
Name: Angel Starlin Bain
Alias: Dark Fighter
Height: 174 cm
Weight: 49 kg
Particular signs: scar on his forehead caused by a battle
Relationships: Tony Stark
Marital status: Single
Education: Hi-Tech Academy
Place of Birth: Venice, Italy
Place of Residence: Malibu, USA
Style: Rock or Gothic style
Curiosities: high knowledge at technology and robotics engineering
Personality: Sarcastic, megalomaniac, smart, ironic, adventuros, hides her sentiments, lonely, silent, sincere
Angel is a young student and she was born in Venice (Italy).
Angel is stubborn and she doesn’t give up.
She likes technology, and loves Tony Stark.
She lived in Italy until the age of thirteen, then she moved to New York and after to Malibu.
While in New York, she met Justin Hammer, and she decided to work for Hammer.
Every night, she went to Stark Industries to steal secret information about Iron Man.
But, one night, she saw Tony Stark and fell in love with him.
With the information he had stolen, he decided to build an armor.
She returned to Hammer Industries and canceled all information, she moved to Malibu.
In Malibu, she made her armor, and she enrolled in a school: Hi-Tech Academy.
One day, Tony Stark went to Hi-Tech Academy for a robotic lesson, even though Angel was an expert in robotics, pretended not to know nothing for be helped by Tony.
For a moment Tony saw her grades and realized that this was only an excuse, but he did not care.
Every day, Tony watched Angel, and over time Tony fell in love with her.
The last day of school, there was a party, Angel was sit when Tony arrived and asked her to dance.
She accepted. When the party was finished, Tony asked her to go to is home but she refused.
Tony managed to persuade her only a kiss. At Tony’s house, they laughed and talked until late at night, later, they slept together (they only slept, they didn’t do bad anything).
From that night, they began to go out together.
One night, while Angel testing her armor, she saw that Iron Man was in trouble and decided to help him. Iron Man asked her name, but she started to run away, after a long chase she managed to escape.
From that night, all the world but especially Tony asks: Who is Dark Fighter???
OMG! Yes, I know this look like Natsu with purple hair and eyes, but this is how this Gary Sue creator design him. -_- Alright, let’s move on to the real topic. I found this guys profile on the owners profile and boy do I want to smack the owner of this Gary Sue, let’s dive in on this Gray Sue.
Name : Kirikateku Dragneel
Alias’ : Belphegor, Salamander
Okay, I don’t even know if his name is a real name, but I do know he can’t be a Dragneel since Natsu is the only Dragneel from getting the name from Igneel. Also, he can’t be called Salamander, that is Natsu’s name.
Age : 18
Gender : Male
Magic : Fire Dragon slayer, White Dragon Slayer, Shadow Dragon Slayer, Fire Devil Slayer, Fire God Slayer, Heavenly Body, Gravity, Memory Make, Re-quip (swords and other hand to hand weapons) Arc Of Time
Okay, age and sex is okay, I guess, but he can’t have that many different types of magic!!! One, he only gets one! -_- He can’t be a Fire Dragon Slayer because Natsu is the only one and if your character was one it would mess up Natsu as a canon. -_- He can’t have White Dragon Slayer because that is Sting’s and Sting killed the last known dragon of that type and again it would be like in Natsu’s case. -_- Shadow Dragon Slayer is Rogue’s and it goes on the same line for Stings. -_- Really, Fire Devil Slayer? No! There has only been one Devil Slayer in the series and that is Silver, so just stop. Fire God Slayer? No, just, no. Natsu kills the only know Fire God Slayer. -_- The rest he can’t have. You can only have one, uno, and etc out of all of these. Requip is logical, but none of the others. -reads more- F@#$, the Reequip makes no since, he’s either sword or gun. Nothing more on that. -_- -rubs my head from a pounding headache-
Guardians : Natsu Dragneel, Lucy Heartfilia
Guardians? What do you mean by this, if your many parents there is no way on this Earth they can be since he is 18!!! DX
Hair colour : Purple
Eye colour : Dark Purple, Blood Red (when in demon form)
I guess the hair color is fine, but how the living crap does he even have a demon form? -_- That isn’t listed in the unrealistic magic list you have. So your saying he has magic like Mirajane Struess too. -_-
Guild : Fairy Tail (Century Class Mage)
Is there even a Century Class Mage in the Fairy Tail series? If so this is the first I’ve heard of it.
Guild mark location : Left side of chest
Likes : Kaira Lockheart, Fighting, Becoming stronger, My friends, My team
Dislikes : Transport, Getting soaked, Dark Guilds
I guess the Guild Mark Location is fine, but seriously? I can understand liking a person, but you likes after that are so over done and should be explained, not just thrown together. -_- Not every Dragon Slayer get’s Motion Sickness, so him disliking transport at a low level like he should be should bother him. Getting soak? Seriously, your copying Gray now. Dark Guilds seem like the only legit dislike, but again you should explain WHY!?!
Okay, I’m done, I know know how you guys that do this all the time can handle this bs.