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Found a NiGHTS sue. This thing is irritating.

So far, the suethor has a 10 chapter fanfic about her OC. But because it’s TEN chapters, I think that doing a Let’s Read of the whole thing would be too much. So instead, I decided that it would be better if I were to just describe to the best of my ability the sue’s backstory, with all information being taken from what I’ve read in the fic. I will also occasionally take snippets from said fic to aid in my description. This will be Part 1 of my description, so let’s get to it!

First thing’s first, I’ll start with the basics. The sue was originally a human named Dialla Ramsey. She’s apparently a 16 year old girl who is 5.2 and 107 lbs. (I was a little curious about those measurements. Correct me if I’m wrong, but based on what I’ve researched, this sue is seriously leaning towards being underweight!). However, the suethor just hand waves it as her being “small for her age”.

She also has the whole tragic backstory thing. Her mother cheated on her father and he left as a result. Surprise surprise, the father was also the stereotypical “good and kind parent” who believed in the sue’s crazy whimsical little fantasies about seeing NiGHTS related things in real life and he’s the only one who was ever kind to her and understood her and blah blah blah, you get the picture. The mother is the stereotypical “mean and evil parent”:

She ran a hand through her dark pink hair, wishing she had inherited her father’s royal blue. She had asked her mom into dying it that color but the woman wouldn’t have it.

"I don’t want to look at you and be reminded of him!" Her mother would say, then would always add with a bitter voice. "You act like him enough as it is."

To which Dialla would retort in her mind. ‘As apposed to being be a trollop like you, that can’t hold a relationship for more than a month? No thank you!’ But of course she would never says this out loud. She couldn’t stand to be slapped again. A punch was one thing but slaps just stung and were humiliating.

UUUGGHHH IT’S SO MELODRAMATIC JUST STOP

So the mother is neglectful, abusive, and brings home strange men. This is also another part of the sue’s tragic past, as the man that the sue’s mom is with in particular, Stan, is apparently a big creeper towards Dialla and attempts to rape her at one point. She gets away, locks herself in her room, tries to call the police, drops the phone, AND THEN PROCCEDS TO JUST SIT DOWN AND DRAW HER FIREND’S NiGHTS OC LIKE NOTHING HAPPENED. It never affects her, NOT ONCE, throughout the rest of the fucking story and it is never mentioned again.

The sue’s school life is also annoyingly cliché. She has two friends that are literally walking anime stereotypes, Polly (the “perky and kawaii bubbly girl who’s all about fashion and is rich!!”) and Kitty (the “rebel, goth girl who’s emotionless and tells off the stupid preps!!”). And of course, what sue sob story would be complete without the generic bully preps! :

"Yeah, Dialla, where’s the dumpster you dug that outfit out of." A nasally voice chimed in. Standing there in all her puffed up vanity was Gigi Windsor and her posy giggling like morons. One of the followers stepped forward and without warning, tugged at Dialla’s magenta locks with her hand. "Look at this! Such a bold color!" She cried.

Gigi sniffed and turned her nose up. “Cici, don’t touch garbage, who knows where its been.” She flipped her dyed blonde locks.

Cici let go like she had touched poo. “Eeeew! Now I like have to wash my hands!” she wined and her twin sister Mimi consoled her.

Gigi stepped up and glared down at Dialla, she had a few inches on the other girl. “It’s bad enough to exist when no one wants you, your daddy left for a reason. Get a clue.” She smirked as Dialla’s eyes got wide and started to water, but wasn’t counting on the girl she had picked on for so long to grow a backbone.

The pink haired girl bristled and shoved Gigi away from her as hard as she could, causing the bully to fall back on her butt. “Don’t you dare talk bad about my dad, you… you… whore!” Living alone with her mother gave Dialla the special slut-detector.

Gigi’s eyes flared and she got to her feet then swung her hand. Her manicured nails were out for blood.

YAY WAY TO SLUT SHAME WOMEN WHO DRESS GIRLY SUETHOR

Mini rant here, I can’t STAND it when suethors do this. It’s petty, it’s snobby, and it doesn’t make us like your OC any better. Get over yourself.

Ahem, ANYWAY, so it turns out that the sue and both her friends are all NiGHTS fangirls, particularly the sue herself (remember this fact):

"By the way," Polly decided to change the subject and take their minds off the unpleasantness of high school. "I finally got the last issue!" Polly cried excitedly, taking a comic book out of her pack and then shoving it in Dialla’s face. "Sorry, I’m just so psyched that I have the complete set!"

"S’okay. Let me see!" Dialla, grateful for the change of topics, took the thin paperback out of her squealing friend’s hands. "Oh my gosh! This is it! Nights into Dreams 6th issue!" she exclaimed flipping madly through the comic, squealing and blushing at every part that showed a picture of Nights.

Yeah. The sue’s “admiration” gets progressively creepier:

Dialla was staring out the window at the clouds, daydreaming. She took pride in her ability to daydream. Unlike her night dreams which haven’t changed and where she lacks control, she was in her element. Sometimes it became so intense that she couldn’t see anything even though her eyes were open, she would fly, run, jump; but her body stayed still in her seat.

In this particular moment she was daydreaming about NiGHTS of course and she was flying with him through the clouds, laughing and smiling at each other. Suddenly, the nightmaren was in front of her. His marble blue eyes sparkled with love and untold secrets. She smiled back. Their faces drew closer and closer, he closed his eyes and she did the same.

Their lips-

Tap.

Dialla’s eyes snapped open when something hit her temple and she looked down to see a tiny pink paper airplane on her desk. Stupid Polly.

Unwrapping the paper she read the sparklely blue ink. ‘Dreaming about a certain purple horned cutie?’ she glanced at the sender and gave a sheepish grin that made Polly giggle. The blonde went back to taking notes in her pink fuzzy notebook.

Unbeknown to Dialla, Kitty was staring at her from her desk behind her. The bluenette’s eyes narrowed and she forced herself to look back at her sketchbook, where love poems written to NiGHTS took the place of math notes.

And creepier:

She sighed looking at another picture on her desk; it was a picture of herself and Nights together. She was so pathetic. Not only was she a die hard fan of a game hardly anyone plays, she actually dreams of him coming for her and rescuing her from this place.

Why she put so much faith in this imaginary being was simply because she loved him. Correction, she was madly in love with the purple jester… head over heels, couldn’t stop thinking about him, in love. She loved his care-free personality, how no matter how dire everything got he could still bring her joy. She wished on countless stars for him to come alive and be her boyfriend… maybe more. Yet no matter how hard she wished, it never came true.

And creepier:

She slammed the door shut and locked all seven locks then dead-bolted the door, and then shoved her dresser in front of the door. Once the barricade was up, she dove under the bed and sobbed, her fingers shook as she tried to punch in 9-1-1, but she dropped the phone when her door knob rattled and Stan pounded on the door, screaming at her and calling her all kinds of things.

Dialla moved back further under the bed, squeezing her eyes shut and attempted to day dream him gone. She daydreamed that NiGHTS came through her window and flew her out to safety, whispering that it was going to be alright, chanting her name over and over.

This chick’s crazy!!! Seriously, there’s liking a character and then there’s flat out obsession! If it’s affecting her so much that it’s also affecting her life, I think it’s time for a major reality check!

Anyway, the sue falls asleep, ends up in Nightmare, and gets saved by Reala. He takes her to Wizeman where he turns her into the above pic: a half human, half Nightmaren replacement for NiGHTS (who they also never stop comparing her to by the way) named DAiZ (yeah, DAiZ, so original). When asked for an explanation as to why her of all people, we get this:

"You will replace the one who betrayed me."

NiGHTS. “B-but why me?

"I have my reasons. From now on, your name is DAiZ."

BECAUSE REASONS. The suethor’s explanation for DAiZ being chosen is literally BECAUSE REASONS. Keep in mind that this also is never brought up again or questioned, she just accepts it. This sue is not only crazy, she’s also an idiot.

After she blindly just accepts her new enslavement, she walks around with Reala and gets to know him (this is told instead of shown mind you). He is completely OOC and is polite and courteous to her and even tells her of his super-secret plan to overthrow Wizeman (whom he is completely loyal to in the games) at some point and take over for himself. He just tells her this, like it’s no big deal! Also, remember all of that obsessive fangirling over NiGHTS that she did? How she went on and on about how he’s her ideal boyfriend? COMPLETELY FORGOTTEN, she just moves on to Reala:

Creepy! Creepy! Creepy! Creepy! Creepy! Creepy! Creepy! Creepy!

He’s kinda cute.

DAiZ shook her head, “Where did that come from?! Cute? He’s scary!

But a good scary. Her mind argued.

He gives me the creeps. She shot back.

Creeps? Or something more along the lines of nosebleeds? Her mind purred, if minds could even purr.

Gross… He looks like the lead mime from a circus slasher flick.

But a cute mime-

"Ahhh! SHUT UP!" She screamed.

Greeeaaaattt, a badly-written love triangle, that’s just what this story needs. The next three chapters after this is just useless filler dedicated to showing how happy the sue is now that’s she’s been kidnapped and becoming friends with practically all of the bosses in the entire game like they’re one big happy family or something. She’s also stated to be training throughout this period, which could be a great way to show her getting over a conflict that she is said to have at the beginning of her enslavement (she can’t fly), but it’s never gone into detail and is just once again told instead of shown. We never once see her make an attempt to try and fly, we’re just told that she’s been trying.

Whew! And that concludes Part 1 of my summary! I’ll get Part 2 uploaded once I’m done with it (Only one more chapter of horror left!).

Hope you enjoyed!

alright so…

recently, someone i watch on deviantART has been posting a comic involving canon characters, and her own OC, which is fine… except for the way she has her character.

to start off, this is a professor layton OC who’s name is wolf. yes. wolf. 

and of course, like all good sues, she has a thing going on with descole. she is apparently (because of this comic) now his ‘partner’ as in partner in crime. she was his apprentice, like luke is to the professor, but more of crime stuff.

you know what descole has? wolves. so why not name her wolf, because i dunno that makes perfect sense

anyway, she’s pretty annoying and her creator had her name as ‘erin’ something and also ‘alana’ and i am so confused on what her real name is.

also, before i actually get into my point about why she is a giant sue, i would also like to mention that the descole x wolf shipping is hinted at almost all the time, and wolf (like all the descole x oc sues) is only around 18-early 20s while descole (albeit he doesn’t look it) is early forties.

into what the problems.

in her most recent comic, wolf and descole and the butler (i think his name was raymond but i dont remember off the top of my head so i’ll just call him butler) are pretty like ‘let’s go after bronev’. the one character that everyone hated because HE HAS TOUCHED OUR PRECIOUS DESCOLE SO HE MUST PARISH

and of course, bronev is like ‘ayyyy’ and huge fight. wolf pretty much went ‘screw this’ and ran after bronev, and after descole and raymond move their slow asses to go get her, she’s been beat up by bronev. THIS is where the problems come in. (also would like to say, i would provide visuals but im posting this from my laptop which can’t really do much, but it’s actually decent art and it’s okay but the story went south.) bronev has a sword (he is not one of the only men in the series that uses a sword, by the way) and commence sword fight with descole, when bronev could have easier shot him and the butler, and wolf but no we must let them live. long story short, descole almost dies when wolf valiently sacrifices herself to save him and actually almost dies doing so

like this hasn’t happened plenty of times before with other sues

and then descoles pretty much going to try and avenge her death when, WHOOP-DE-DOO SHE’S NOT DEAD

WHO WOULD HAVE GUESSED IT

also would like to mention the fact that she got cut in the abdomen with a sword. a SWORD. and she lived through it.

so p much the butler’s like “shes alive” and they escape and a week later she wakes up and descole going in to see her and he was actually the reason she woke up bc of that one tear, and there’s the fact she’s not wearing a hospital gown because no, we must have bandaged boobs. hospitals gowns mean no fanservice. we can’t have that.

and she almost kisses him until the freaking butler shows up and thank god because too much pedophilia.

my question is

how did she live through all of this especially a freaking SWORD

WHY DID BRONEV NOT KILL THEM WHEN HE HAD THE CHANCE

WHY DOES WOLF NOT HAVE A ‘DRIP’ (idk what it’s actually called) OR HOSPITAL GOWN OR ANYTHING ACCURATE TO BEING IN A HOSPITAL

so many unanswered questions and so many comments like

"im so happy she lived" "why didnt descole kill bronev for wolf" and stuff

ugh

Another self-submit from my side.

When I was 12, I was a hardcore WWE fangirl. I adored Jeff Hardy and wrote fanfiction after every new episode of smackdown. He was the main protagonist, alongside with his current “enemies” and me. His girlfriend. My character was a blatant self insert, I didn’t even change my name or appearance , I just aged myself up. Of course everybody loved me, I won every match and never got in any trouble. 

I did not even invent own storylines. I just took what happened in an Episode,  wrote it down and put my angsty self somewhere in it.

After Jeff left the wwe , I just randomly got drafted into the men’s division, because I wasn’t like other girls, urgh.

Whenever this abomination falls into ma hamds I cringe, so take it and never give it back please.

Mm so this fantroll is basically Aradia with a different name also she is shipped with Sollux

my fantroll!!!! by Sugoi-Desu-Ham

my fantrol!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :33 this is her catform btww

ok but i should probz add some informatino on her lolz =^.^=

okay her name is candy makara. her last name is like dat because shes married 2 gamzee markara :3 her brother is karkat and hes REEEEALLY protective and doesnt approve of their marriage! :( he trys to talk her out of being with him!! her bff is kanaya and they like to go shoping together al the time! her worst enemy is vriska! they HATE eachother!! once in a fyte, candy ripped vriskas arm off (robot arm!!) and she plucket out her majic eye. but she deserved it because she killed tavros!! she has rainbow blood. shes the only troll on earth that has it!!! its really special so PLEEEASE dont steal my idea plz :(
her quirk is like this;
":3)<i love you gamzee!!"

ill post her normal form soon! maybe tomorrow lolz

she has 3 dream forms. prospit, derce, and another world wich SHE CREATED!! they have rainbow colored outfits (it goes wit her blood!)

she also has an evil form that only cums out wen someone is being REALLY mean!!!!!! like trolls. sometimes she tastes gamzees faygo and goes insane!!! and then she LIKE THIS, WITH JUST BIG LETTERS BECAUSE SHES REALLY MAD AND BLOODTHIRSTY!!

I’m sure this is a joke troll

This girl’s two Naruto OC’s (even though they look the same) Saiyuki Uchiha and Johanna Hitomè, with Eren and Levi from SNK…

This is my lovely bby Hikari, She is the most uuber perfs OC that I’ve evar made~

She is a half human half chipmunk hybrid after becoming a mew mew and she is the best mew EVARRR!!!1!! She can use the mew aqua rod even without any because she is just totes perfect~

once she became the MOST POWERFIL MEW EVA she got bored and moved to the sea, whrer she discovered that she was the super secret 8th mermaid princess, and she rules all teh seas becasue she is sooo beauteeful and amazing!!Then, she decided to go to equestria and she became a super powerful alicorn and she rules there too and celectia and luna and evryone is totes in love with her (but she is super straight guyzz no yuri thnx)

Finally, she moved to the sonic world and married sonic and had 20 bootiful babies and they all went to different worlds and married the main protagonists.

the best OC I ever made.

This girl is turning herself in…

When I first got into My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, I went in with a skepticism towards the series but emerged with a love of the show that I finally understood. It took the end of the second season for me to create my first OC, a “secret alicorn princess” named Stellamara.

It’s really hard to look at her first form, now that made a complete rehaul to her character.

She was supposed to be the “SOOPER SEKRET DAUGHTER” of Princess Luna and a dark Mage I named Tenebris (he no longer exists.) Supposedly, her birth was covered up by the Equestirian Monarchy because Celestia found out about Luna’s affair with a dangerous criminal. And it also turns out that Stellamara also suffered from the Splash Effect (turning into a hippocampus/merpony after being exposed to water and gaining limbs back when dry.) Supposedly AGAIN, she would secretly help her “mother” raise the stars at night. Inquisitive and curious, she would often roam the castle libraries looking for everything/ANYTHING to read. Her biggest problem was her nosiness, stubbornness, and her inability to realize why she HAD to be kept a secret. Her magic prowess was strongest in Water, Ice, Illusions, and Dark (not deep deep DEEEEEEP dark like her father… like Pokemon dark type.)

I never rped with her or showed her off to anyone because everyone I knew actually had NORMAL interests; not ponies, anime, creepypasta or criminal psychology. Besides all of these secret interests, I was an instant bully-magnet just for living.

Anyway, after a few years of hiding Stellamara away, I found out about how taboo Alicorn OCs were/are. And how much of a monster I created. Surprisingly though, I wanted to keep her name. But I knew that her entire history/personality/design/etc. had to die.

So, here she is now!

I haven’t found a good cutie mark for her yet (personally, I want it to be a little more complex than average…) but she is skilled in water and ice magic, but mostly water. Though she was in Twilight’s year at Princess Celestia’s School for Gifted Unicorns, Stellamara has never met any of the main characters. While her grades were rather high, they weren’t the highest in the school (more like above-average.)She lusts for knowledge and sometimes lets her ambitions get to her head. She turns into a Velma when she loses her glasses but is too squeamish to put in contacts. I’m currently thinking of Stellamara having recurring nightmares of her past life as a Sue and trying to receive help for said nightmares.

If you ever get constructive criticism on your character, don’t act huffy and try to aggress that your character is “”KAWAII DESU AND OH SO PERFECT IN EVERY WAY AND U R JUST JELLY OF HER SUGOINESS.”

Just remember what Jimmy Neutron once said, “People are supposed to be flawed! Their flaws are what makes them perfect.”

Soooooo all the way back in 2008 I had a very brief stint in Batman Fandom. This is an OC I made to be paired with the Penguin. She was inexplicably British (not from a specific area or anything, just ~British~) and had metal wings in her back that unfolded. You could severely injure and incapacitate her by sticking a fork in her back.

She and Penguin became business partners who hated each other  but both liked birds and somehow ended up dating and having a kid named Peacock. As my OCs go she’s pretty inoffensive but still wowe self, wowe. Also I was going for ‘not traditionally pretty’ but didn’t have the drawing ability yet so the face is just kind of jenky.

HI GUYS! I made my own Sue. Fear me. I might write some fan fiction about her. Please be gentle, she’s so precious to meh~

Name: Wilburina Von Schlangenbaumf, though most people call her Angel

Age: 16 at DH

School: Hogwarts

House: The Sorting Hat told Angel that she could have been in ANY house. So she was able to choose and of course picked Slytherin. 

Wand: Cherry, Unicorn Hair AND Phoenix Feather. She’s so special. 

Patronus: A fairy. 

Appearance: Angel is so attractive most male students start walking to walls when they pass her. She has icy blue eyes, slender nose, luscious lips and long lashes andandand the omg-most-perfect eye brows ever seen. Angel’s hair is almost white. She has a petite figure and could be modeling only if she would be taller than 5”2. Angel likes natural make up, wavy curls and girly clothes. 

Trivia: Angel is an unregistered animagus, she can transform into a beautiful swan. Because she is so talented Angel received a special permission to fight against Death Eaters at the end of her sixth year. Angel had many boys chasing her but ended up with Srius Black whom she magically brought back to life. Other guys just seemed so… immature. So basically she is Harry’s godmother. Yay special-ness! 

(I’m so sorry, please don’t kill me)

Here’s a joke sue I founnnnnd!

Name: Lillian Potter (Harry’s twin sister)

Age:15 or 16 (6th year)

House: Griffendor

Appearance: Have a scar but it is not that big. Her hair used to be brown and curly, but she dyed it blonde, her hair also changes colour depending on her emotions. One of her eyes is blue and the other is green. Tall and perfect figure. Pale, almost white, skin.

 Personality: brave, nice to everyone but mean to her enemies, bubbly, caring and romantic (in other words, no personality whatsoever).

Likes: One Direction, The Wanted, Percy Jackson and the Lighting Thief series, New York city, pizza, butterbeer, Hogsmade.

Best subjects: charms, transfiguration, potions, defence against the dark arts, herbology, study of magical creatures, flying, magical history, etc.

Dislikes: Slythyerins, bullies, the Dusley family, spiders and snakes.

Friends: Hermoine, Ron, Harry, Ginny and pretty much all the other canon characters.

Boyfriend: Draco Malfoy, they love each other so much that they are willing to die for each other, despite Draco being a Slytherin. Voldemort wants her as his wife (no, seriously, that is what the whole story is about).

Weaknesses: None mentioned.

A sample of her story, Back off Malfoy (which does not make any sense):

'Lily you okay?' Quizzes Hermione. 'I-I-I'm good' I stammered lying. 'No you're not, tell me or I'll get Harry.' She shouted. 'He who must not be named appeared and told me I'm his forever and ever. Then he was going to put the killing curse on me and I woke up' I said, tears still streaming down my cheeks. 'That's horrible.' Ginny said, waking up. 'You were awake?' Asked Hermione and we all burst out laughing but was cut short by me bursting into tears again. 'What if he comes after us and harms Harry?' I asked concerned. 'Don't worry Lily he's never coming back.' Said 'Mione, trying to calm me down. I nodded my hair still a dark shade of blue meaning deeply sad.

welp


A direct decendent of Godric Gryffindor. Skyler is a smart and brave young woman being in the house of Gryffindor with her ferrit Brave. When Harry starts his first year at Hogwarts she is in her Fifth year with her flame Oliver Wood, she is also on the Gryffindor Quidditch team as a Chaser. She is normally seen helping younger students (that are not Draco) find their way around and help with homework. Oliver and Skyler start dating by the middle of their fifth year and continued till their graduation and are engaged during the Battle of Hogwarts. Skyler has a semi pale complextion like Godric along with red hair and green eyes like the Founder of Hogwarts. Her wand has a Phoenix feather core and Pine wood of 11&#8221; in length. By the time skip at the end of the movie, Skyler is now Mrs. Skyler Wood having four kids with Oliver and a fifth on the way. Their eldest three are in Hogworts as Gryffindors like their parents, and the youngest of the three is starting his first year with his older brother and sister. Their younger sister will be starting in two years. All in all, after the Battle of Hogwarts, the Woods live a happy and safe life with one another~

Admin note:  Direct descendant of Godric Gryffindor my arse. This is why I hate the Harry Potter fandom.  
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

A direct decendent of Godric Gryffindor. Skyler is a smart and brave young woman being in the house of Gryffindor with her ferrit Brave. When Harry starts his first year at Hogwarts she is in her Fifth year with her flame Oliver Wood, she is also on the Gryffindor Quidditch team as a Chaser. She is normally seen helping younger students (that are not Draco) find their way around and help with homework. Oliver and Skyler start dating by the middle of their fifth year and continued till their graduation and are engaged during the Battle of Hogwarts. Skyler has a semi pale complextion like Godric along with red hair and green eyes like the Founder of Hogwarts. Her wand has a Phoenix feather core and Pine wood of 11” in length. By the time skip at the end of the movie, Skyler is now Mrs. Skyler Wood having four kids with Oliver and a fifth on the way. Their eldest three are in Hogworts as Gryffindors like their parents, and the youngest of the three is starting his first year with his older brother and sister. Their younger sister will be starting in two years. All in all, after the Battle of Hogwarts, the Woods live a happy and safe life with one another~

Nonono

I noticed there was a lack of Kingdom Hearts OCs, so I’m here to save the day with my oldest sue that I have held on to for ages.

So back in the day, I got into Kingdom Hearts. Specifically KH2 which is my favorite game. I fell in love with Roxas (because I fell in love with Jesse like a million years ago). And from that moment on I knew I would have to have an OC!

Well my friend and I found this club on dA called OrganizationXSociety which was where everyone tossed there OCs/self inserts and we all lived in harmony. My friend created her OC Luma (wow works out so well) and I created Axula (huh wonder what TV show I was into at the time?) On the left you’ll see her first design in its original state. And below I attached her original bio.

Name: Axula (The X makes the Z sound)
Gender: Female
Nickname: The Gem of Flames

Hair Color: Black with red streaks and tips
Eye Color: Purple
Personality: Sweet and kind and VERY shy. But when provoked, she can do some REAL damage.
Weapon: Fire kunai and shuriken and 2 flame Katana’s.
Element: Fire
Habits: Never usually thinks before acting.

Friends: Axel, Larxene, Demyx, Roxas and Zexion.
Major Enemies: Saix, Luxord and Marluxia.
Crush/Love: Roxas

Known Family: The organization!
Quote: “I take being a pyro VERY offensive.”
Past Injuries: None
other: Number 14 (XIV) in the Organization and she’s 15.

Basically she was kind of me but not me at the same time. I copied a lot off of Axel and made them BFFs. I like to think of her as what Xion if she were a massive sue. So Axula and Roxas fell in love and then Roxas left the organization (mind you I made her bio before 358/2 days even came out). She tried to follow him and bring him back but realized there was no point. So she sat in the castle and cried about it…a lot. I never changed her bio, but eventually Axula was “terminated”. This was due to lack of activity. A head stone was made in her honor! Yet I can’t find it D:

Well I revisited her years later and went holy shit this is unacceptable. I sat down and redrew her to reflect more of the KH style. I’m reworking her bio to make her not as much of a sue. Please enjoy! I have a multitude of Sue’s…

Is this a good time to vent about an old atrocity?

This was my first OC, written when I was probably 12 and last drawn in 2011. I’ve held this too long. I need to share how bad this PoS was. Maybe this is a good time. We can all laugh.
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Name: Kama Shay (it was ‘Ito’ in earlier incarnations)

Clan: Shay/Uchiha (yeah. she’s a halfling. kill me plz)
Age: 13 in original, 16 in Shippuden
Rank: Genin
Species: Human/Vampire (with no explination or repercussions)
Sexual Orientation: Oh So Very Straight (pretty much all the main guys crush on her. she didn’t even talk to girl characters. dear god.)
Personality: Passive-agressive and cold. Only reasonable to Sasuke/the crush interest of the moment. Socially-inept and randomly nice at best, homicidal and rash at worst. I wrote her essentially like a sociopath.
Good Traits: uhhhhhh
Bad Traits: prone to violent outbursts for no considerable reason, regards topics such as cutting, death, and kiling with a sick sense of amusement/contempt.
Likes: Singing, cooking, being excessively hostile to Sakura for hardly no reason
Dislikes: being abducted, ‘Mr.pedo’
Fears: snakes (laugh when i tell you she joins Orochimaru and completely forgets about this only once-used fear)
Personal Quote: “You haven’t changed one bit…Sasuke.”
Powers: Kekke-genkai “Psychi” (don’t ask me what it does, I really can’t tell you), singing jutsu(?), chakra barriers (???), random medical ninjutsu only used 60 pages in
Skilled in: Speed, Endurance, Genjutsu (the song jutsu thing)
Weak in: Taijutsu, Strength

Okay, so apparently Kama was a halfie but when she was like 5 she supposedly killed her friend to obtain mangekyo and got banned from the clan, only to go to the shay clan in an unnamed village settlement.
Then apparently Orochimari raids their little settlement and kills everyone (but her of course) but she has ‘distinctive eyes’ because they’re bright-ass green
so way later he meets her with Team 7 and recognizes her? This had no further purpose, I don’t know why I went to the trouble of setting it up.
So she meets Sasuke when they’re little before she goes yandere and he saves her from drowning because oh the dramaz. She goes away and Team 7 rescues her from a hostage situation.
She bawws about being a medical-nin slave for her clan, even though she has heir money? or something? So basically Sasuke and Kama become emo-baww friends and of course they like eachother
so they throw OOC dialogue at eachother at inappropriate times (like right after she saves Sasuke from a spike-pitted death). Kama is hiding her Uchiha origin for some reason? I really don’t know why,
and I can’t explain how an exiled nin could so easily go back to her village after committing murder? Don’t think that I used the vampire thing for anything cool,
it was literally only for comic relief. The kekke-genkai thing is also never used in battle. She uses her medical ninjutsu all of twice, and her random chakra barrier power only once when it wasn’t even necessary.
Of course she gets her own curse mark (earth) so she can run off to Sound with her little emo lover boy. Antics ensue and kama is kidnapped, she fights Orochimaru in Final Valley.
Not only does she wound him to the point of no longer being able to fight, she stays okay enough to go back to Sound to help heal him. Sasuke goes after her and why do they stay? I gave literally no reason.
I went from being afraid of snakes and terrified of Orochimaru to hanging out in his snake cave JUST BECAUSE. I didn’t even have Sasuke go dark to his curse mark, so he has no reason either at that point.

She originated as a self-insert-in-disguise to be with Sasuke, but I ended up having Gaara, Neji, Naruto, and even Orochimaru crush on her in some way rather in the central story or in a spinoff fic.
I wrote things in that story that make me ashamed to be breathing, and I wrote many more that shame me in completely different ways (KamaxOro), but I feel like I need to get it out so i can move on.
I actually still use the first name, as you can see. I don’t even use it for meaning anymore (it meant scythe. Yeah. It was cited as a beta name for Kakashi); I’ve grown so used to the sound that I use that alias on pretty much all my sites.

I have created a new Kama Shay, but she is far different from this attrocity. Maybe now I can lay this crazy SoB to rest.

I’M TURNING MYSELF IN (LoZ OC)

I was digging through some papers I found (hidden in the darkest, deepest crevice of my closet) and I found some old pics of an… “OC” I made some 423647897 years ago based off of one I read IN ANOTHER FANFICTION ON QUIZILLA. (I was VERY original, you see)

(no pics sorry scanner is kaput)

Name: Saya 

Age: 17

Appearance: White hair blue eyes and she always wore this sleeveless white dress and Triforce earrings.

(I cannot read my handwriting from when I was younger so sorry I’m just trying to fill in the blanks)

Bio: Marin was born into a poor family and her parents hated her because reasons and one day she woke up and found out she had these kuh-razy powers. Her town was like ‘WITCHCRAFT’ and they killed her parents and she was chased into Kokiri Forest. There she was raised by the Great Deku Tree because he sensed she had some great power. She met Link and they became friends. Then they went on an adventure together as adults THEN ALLUVA SUDDEN she’s walking alone and Shadow Link (somehow) went inside her mind for… no apparent reason. SO THEN she and Link falls in love with her but Saya can’t pick between Shadow Link and Link. Then… she finds out that she got her powers because… SHE IS THE 4TH GODDESS (not to mention the youngest sister) and she was cast out by the other 3 because they thought she was too powerful. 

*head/desk* I’ve created a monster and I cannot kill it. (And sadly I have more of these abominations.)