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We've all made them.
And they have some angsty terrible past.

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Pokemon Sue

Sorry, for bring this Pokemon Sue up but it has really bother me along with some of my friends.

Made on Rinmaru ^^

Maria comes from a very wealthy family but is very weak and has poor eyesight. she has always wanted to become a Pokemon trainer but her family has forbid her from doing so. She runs away to begin her journey!

Pokemon she has:

Gothitelle

Gardevoir

Meloetta

Jynx

Umbreon

Delphoxin

the future I think I’m gonna make her kind of supernatural and she has psychic abilities a bit that helps her see and get through her days ^^ or maybe her Pokemon help her with it. not sure yet

Just no. Don’t even plan on bring psychic abilities to your sue. The only person in Pokemon I know of that had psychic abilities was Sabrina from a Psychic Pokemon Gym in the original series. You would just take away everything that character was. Infact, don’t give her any abilities at all. She isn’t a Pokemon  unless she is mixed, but that would be impossible!!!

Soyuki Lorikenn (Xiaolin Showdown OC)

Hi there, this is a review of an XS OC. Many of these are absolutely awful but I was part of this fandom and I knew these people so I won’t tear into them heartlessly. Many of them have gone on to create great characters, so there’s hope for us all.

My comments will be in italics

Name - Soyuki Lorikenn

Meaning - ‘So’ is for ‘Sophia’ that means ‘Knowledge’ in Greek; ‘Yuki’ means ‘Snow’ in Japanese

Age - 16/18

Nationality - American

Hometown - Macerata (Italy)

Ok to start with, her name sounds Japanese, but she’s an american who was raised in Italy. If she was raised in the USA with a Japanese parent I would over-look this. Most names that are ‘American’ in origin are mash-ups or weird spellings or words. What’s wrong with Italian names? There are two MCs who do not come from Asian countries and their names reflect that, there’s no need to have a Japanese-like name.

The last name is made up, it’s really not that hard to find last names.  

http://surnames.behindthename.com/ Here people, go wild. Here you can look up last names by their nationality.

Certified Birthdate - July 24th

Astrological Sign - Lion

Chinese Astrological Sign - Mouse

Gender - Female

Nickname - N/A

My only issues with this are nit-picking and I’m not 100% sure English is this OC owner’s first language. It’s Leo and Rat, not Lion and mouse.


Physical Description

Hair Color- Light brown

Eye Color - Sea Blue

Weight - 56 kg

Height - 168 cm

Figure - Tough

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Not bad height and weight. After throwing that through some converters into Imperial I found she’s about 5’5 and 127 lbs. In the proper weight category for sure.

Although with body-type I think she meant muscular? If so then the weight works out with it. It’s not close to the bare minimum and those muscles would make her heavier.

Personality

Soyuki has a half-hearted personality, she doesn’t like to spend time with monks, except for training, where she shows a great capacity forteamwork. She hates jokes, is always on the defensive when someone speaks to her, and may seem very bad, even though in reality she does her best to be friendly. But when someone shows her friendship, she’s very sweet and cuddly with that person or people.

O…K? I have no idea what half-hearted means but I’m willing to throw that under the bus of bad translation. Her personality is pretty consistent, if a little over-used, until that last part. ‘even though in reality she does her best to be friendly’. She’s defensive, we’ve established that, she works well with others but that might just mean she can follow orders. People on the defensive aren’t friendly.

Ok so she doesn’t like jokes, what kinds of jokes? Because knowing what material is triggering for her would be a great way to develop her.

It’s basic psychology. Being defensive is your brain taking feelings inside and applying them to outside situations. You can’t be friendly and defensive, it just doesn’t compute. 

Personal Attributes

Good Habits - During the showdown, she focuses and puts all her energy, she doesn’t hesitate to protect others if they are in difficulty.

Bad Habits - Spends too much time alone listening to music, to avoid being in contact with others.

Fetishes/Strange Behaviors - Love blood and violence (for this when Raimundo bothers her or makes fun of her, she pulls out her claws,literally, and wounds him, sometimes becomes a tiger and attack the monks by surprise, even though makes as a joke, and she is careful tonot hurt them)

(For those of you unfamiliar with XS the premise of the show is that these four kids have elemental powers and use them to find magical artifacts called Shen Gong Wu. They have conflicts with the Heylin ‘evil’ side. The four kids are called ‘monks’ and the elements are Air, Water, Fire, and Earth. In Xiaolin Chronicles which is the new series there’s also Wood.)

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Ok, maybe a more detailed personality would help? If she focuses all her energy she’s determined and as for the rest… Why is she protective of the monks unless they make a joke and then all bets are off?

Why can she turn into a tiger, the only one who transforms into anything is Chase Young and he only does that because the Lao Mang Lone Soup made him into an immortal evil dragon-monk. 

Why does she take offense to these jokes? WHAT IS TRIGGERING THIS AGGRESSIVE BEHAVIOR?

Why does she love blood/violence? WHY IS NOTHING LIKE HIS HINTED AT IN PERSONALITY?

Ratings on Personal Qualities

Physical Strength - 10/10

[Since her human DNA is mixed with those of the big cats, her has several features that give her several advantages, for example, is nearly as fast as the cheetah, as silent as a panther, nimble and strong as a tiger and a lioness, also the senses are much finer and is often able toprevent an attack from behind.]

Attractive - 2/10

[Her cat ears and tail, intrigued who sees her for the first time. But her tough body doesn’t make her a very attractive girl.]

Honesty - 8/10

[She doesn’t like to lie, except when absolutely necessary, and sometimes she lie to Chase Young, her adoptive father, when she tells him thatis going to give a bit of trouble to the monks, but in reality she goes to train with them]

Sociability - 4/10

[Prefer to stay with the big cats allies of Chase, rather than with humans.]

Combat Statistics

Species/Race - Human half feline

Special Skills/ Magical Powers/etc The styles of workouts of Xiaolin monks and the Heylin one of Chase Young, make her ruthless and thoughtful at the same time.

Signature Shen Gong Wu - Thorn of Thunderbolt

Weaknesses in combat Water and Fire

Strengths in combat - Agile moves and responsiveness.

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Where to begin? Her strength is massively overpowered. How did she get ‘all the DNA of the big cats’? I sense an angsty backstory coming.

Small miracles folks, she’s not attractive. I kind of like that she mentions people who might have some sort of fetish for cat-ears and tail (maybe that’s why there are so many cat-girl OCs?). Maybe the scar is more disfiguring than her body? I dunno, I’ve seen girls with athletic bodies that are bomb-shells, like dang.

Oh more hinting at an angsty back-story. Honesty is… Strange. I mean I can see Chase being honest, he was a xiaolin monk at one time, but her believably lying to him? He’s over 1000 years old, by that time you learn most tricks in the book. She’d have to be a great liar. Also a bit meh on the sociability aspect. It seems we’ve got an angsty back-story coming up.

Relationships Statuses

Closest Friend(s) - No one

Omi Omi often urge her during training, and in his way comforts her when she is sad. They are good friends, even if he doesn’t accept her hostility towards Raimundo.

Raimundo Soyuki is hyper-sensitive to jokes and pranks, and she doesn’t get along well with Raimundo because of his fun in make pranks and jokes, she knows he doesn’t mean to really hurt her, but this doesn’t stop her to react fiercely.

Kimiko - Being the only girl in the temple, Kimiko is kind to Soyuki, and share a passion for music. But often Kimiko intrudes when Soyuki andRaimundo fight, and she defends… the answer is obvious.

Clay - Clay and Soyuki are good friends thanks to the good-natured character of the cowboy. Soyuki chats happily with him, and teaches how to use the lasso, but when she uses it in the ”wrong” way, he gets angry and scares her.

Dojo - Their relationship is good, even if they don’t talk very often, and the gab of the dragon often irritates Soyuki.

Master Fung - She has a great respect for the teacher, obeys and she doesn’t complain the chores he gives.

Hated Rivals - Jack Spicer and Wuya, she thinks he’s a stupid and useless jerk and a pompous and vain witch.

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Ok where to begin… Omi is very protective of his friends and I don’t think he’d like Soyuki. If she understands that he’s not trying to hurt her feelings maybe she could dial the reaction back a bit. Or, maybe because she’s so honest, tell Raimundo why it bothers her? He’s not an unreasonable guy and I think he’d stop.

Ok Kimiko is in love with Raimundo, that’s canon and accepted. I think, though, Kimiko would try and figure out the reason for Soyuki’s violence. She has no trouble standing up to Raimundo and if she noticed that it was bothering Soyuki enough to incite violence I don’t think she would condone it.

As for Clay. He rarely gets angry. He’s portrayed as the most calm of the group and I doubt he’d get mad quickly if someone who has had no experience with lassos used one improperly.

Dojo and Fung. Well if she’s honest I wouldn’t think she’d be good at hiding her annoyance, most people who are honest aren’t good at hiding things. Consistency please.

Wuya and Jack are pretty spot-on though.

What I can find about this character’s background (it’s really inconsistent surprise surprise) Is that she’s some sort of genetically altered cat-girl. Who can change shape and came to China to learn martial arts. Really. I mean it’s not like she could do that anywhere else in the world. Nope her parents send her to China. There Chase finds her and abducts her. Why you may ask? Because she’s a genetically altered cat-girl and his minions are big cats of course! So he trains her (I don’t know why the only apprentice he’s ever had interest in is Omi because Omi shows great promise as a monk) and she escapes to go with the Xiaolin Monks.

She doesn’t have a cannon pairing (thank god) but she is the Dragon of Lightning. I mean, this doesn’t make much sense does it. In traditional Chinese lore there are 5 elements. It’s assumed that Raimundo’s ‘Wind’ takes the place of metal but now that there’s wood there’s no room for another Xiaolin Dragon. Oh in case you were wondering what her big-cat form looks like:

.:Here Comes The White Disaster:. [READ BELOW!] by StefyC97

How to improve this OC:

~Change the name

~More consistent personality and bio

~please no cat-girl. Chase’s warriors are either big cats or warriors, they don’t have cat-ears and tail.

~Change the bio, it sounds really contrived.

~Don’t make her a xiaolin dragon, no ifs ands or buts about it! There is no room in cannon for more dragons!

Nanase Uzumaki (Mermaid Melody and Naruto)

This is Nanase Uzumaki. 
She is daughter of Naruto, The fox and Hanon, Aqua Pearl Voice.
I draw a OC. She is Hanon and Naruto’s Oldest Daughter.

here is her 

Birth : 2nd May.
Parents : Naurto Uzumaki and Hanon Hosho.
Love Interest : None.
Farvorite Food : Steam Buns, Sushi and Ice Cream.
Weapon : Mixture of Schyte and Rod.
Song : Ever Blue.
Likes : Her Parents, Kakashi, Singing and Using Her Ice Power.
Dislikes : Chaos, gagging, Villains, Water Demons.
Force : Stronger like garuda.

Hanon is From Mermaid Melody. and Naruto from Naruto Shippuden.
Nanase Uzumaki Hosho is Her Full Name.
her name, Nanase was named after Hokuto and Kairi’s Younger Sister from Street Fighter EX.

Hanon Hosho © Pink Hanamori
Naruto Uzumaki 
© Masashi Kishimoto
Nanase Uzumaki 
© me

This is Artwork.

Ask me a request.

One day the twins started fightinf or Sachiko in hopes to win lover her love. Sachiko on the other hand is confused and worried about them.

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Twins: *Fighting*
Sachiko: B-Boys, Why are you fighting? Aren’t we all friends? *blushes softly*

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I hope you like it Neptune Wink Icon 
Sachiko (c) sakifuyumioc
Twins (c) thetrueazure 
Base: Lyon, Gray, Juvia

this is a self-submit that i cant believe i didnt submit earlier

the character isnt really a fan character of any kind (though she did change whenever i joined a new fandom and/or got new clothes lmao) and is pretty much just a giant sue 

the text at the bottom thats cut off says “at first glance” btw

jesus christ this used to be my persona

let’s make a check-list shall we

  • werepire
  • demon
  • shinigami
  • shape-shifter (her cat hat changes animals to whatever she wants and she gains some phsyical resemblance to said animal so thats why she has cat ears/tail with the cat hat??? christ)
  • able to harness electricity
  • able to harness dark electricity?? whatever that is

apparently the amazing reasoning behind why this character had all these powers and abilities is b/c a wolf goddess was playing tricks on her and caused all of that to happen?????

the original story was that she was just a normal orphan girl whose parents died on a trip to paris in a plane accident and she lived alone in a cabin in the woods and just drew all day and surfed the internet i guess??  but she was also part of this teen organization that fought crime and hunted down murderers and i dont understand anymore

anyway she had this wish journal right.  she wrote in it one day that she wished her characters would come to life b/c she was lonely and she also wished she was a werepire for SOME REASON

this wolf appeared in her yard and she followed it ??? and she came to a meadow where the wolf disappeared and one of her characters was in the field and was like “hey” and then she went home and all her other characters were there suddenly and shes like holy shit

the rest of the story is weird b/c this dude apparently cloned one of her characters b/c he wanted a son and he died and the clone turned evil and cloned all her characters to make this clone army and the whole story was just so elaborate and i cant believe i put so much time into it /i literally wrote a novel revolving around this character/

not to mention this character was practically a self-insert of me into my own fictional world (no canon characters in there, just…hundreds of ocs that all lived in the same house) and she changed whenever i did?? shes not my persona anymore and thank god i dont draw like that anymore too but shes still an oc of mine that im very fond of (and ive taken away almost all of those abilities and reverted her back to her original abilities which was just shapeshifting to go with the story OTL her gender’s even changed too)

i think the worst part (besides the top-heavy werewolf form and the unbelievable amount of shit to go with her) was the description on dA:

GOOOOOGGGGG this took FOREVUURRRR…

…and it’s SO HUGE. >:U

Eh.

This is a reference for my persona, Nat Vladimira. I hope she’s not forgotten already. X’D

l’I

… Anyway…

The words cut off at the bottom say “first glance.” Not very much else to say here.

The cat form she has is just a general animal form. For all her forms, the markings and accessories are the same.

BEFORE YOU SAY ANYTHING, the reason she has all this crap to do with her species and attributes is due to the fact that a wolf goddess was messing with her and gave her the powers/abilities/traits. This caame from an attempted novel that I am currently -attempting- to rewrite. 

So… Ja…”

im so sorry you had to read that

so in summary nat vladimira was a terrible terrible sue but ive made her better and i still love her to death even with that terrible terrible history o/ glad i could share her with u

flipnote sue

^ this Oc is an Mew/pachirisu mix with an evil twin whos name in the ocs name backwards with an evil side called dark twix hmm SHE ALSO HAS WINGS good art but take away the wings

This is my lovely bby Hikari, She is the most uuber perfs OC that I’ve evar made~

She is a half human half chipmunk hybrid after becoming a mew mew and she is the best mew EVARRR!!!1!! She can use the mew aqua rod even without any because she is just totes perfect~

once she became the MOST POWERFIL MEW EVA she got bored and moved to the sea, whrer she discovered that she was the super secret 8th mermaid princess, and she rules all teh seas becasue she is sooo beauteeful and amazing!!Then, she decided to go to equestria and she became a super powerful alicorn and she rules there too and celectia and luna and evryone is totes in love with her (but she is super straight guyzz no yuri thnx)

Finally, she moved to the sonic world and married sonic and had 20 bootiful babies and they all went to different worlds and married the main protagonists.

the best OC I ever made.

Soooooo all the way back in 2008 I had a very brief stint in Batman Fandom. This is an OC I made to be paired with the Penguin. She was inexplicably British (not from a specific area or anything, just ~British~) and had metal wings in her back that unfolded. You could severely injure and incapacitate her by sticking a fork in her back.

She and Penguin became business partners who hated each other  but both liked birds and somehow ended up dating and having a kid named Peacock. As my OCs go she’s pretty inoffensive but still wowe self, wowe. Also I was going for ‘not traditionally pretty’ but didn’t have the drawing ability yet so the face is just kind of jenky.

"this is josh.Josh has anger issues,panic attacks and is depressedjosh is a troll human (his eyes are blue x3)”

this is josh.
Josh has anger issues,panic attacks and is depressed
josh is a troll human (his eyes are blue x3)

Oh. Okay.

I’M TURNING MYSELF IN (LoZ OC)

I was digging through some papers I found (hidden in the darkest, deepest crevice of my closet) and I found some old pics of an… “OC” I made some 423647897 years ago based off of one I read IN ANOTHER FANFICTION ON QUIZILLA. (I was VERY original, you see)

(no pics sorry scanner is kaput)

Name: Saya 

Age: 17

Appearance: White hair blue eyes and she always wore this sleeveless white dress and Triforce earrings.

(I cannot read my handwriting from when I was younger so sorry I’m just trying to fill in the blanks)

Bio: Marin was born into a poor family and her parents hated her because reasons and one day she woke up and found out she had these kuh-razy powers. Her town was like ‘WITCHCRAFT’ and they killed her parents and she was chased into Kokiri Forest. There she was raised by the Great Deku Tree because he sensed she had some great power. She met Link and they became friends. Then they went on an adventure together as adults THEN ALLUVA SUDDEN she’s walking alone and Shadow Link (somehow) went inside her mind for… no apparent reason. SO THEN she and Link falls in love with her but Saya can’t pick between Shadow Link and Link. Then… she finds out that she got her powers because… SHE IS THE 4TH GODDESS (not to mention the youngest sister) and she was cast out by the other 3 because they thought she was too powerful. 

*head/desk* I’ve created a monster and I cannot kill it. (And sadly I have more of these abominations.)

this is my wolfdog baby, her name is Star. I’d like to have it known that I’ve known her since she was a puppy, even though she wasn’t our dog. She was my grandparents. And when they died and we lost the mountain property. We adopted her and she lives with us <3

So I’m looking over my first fic again and I have to say I’m blown away with how terrible of a writer I was when I was nine. I had no idea what was going on and just doing whatever seemed like a good idea. Here are a few excerpts from the fic that show how illogical everything was and just how bad of a character Daisy was. This fic was literally just a clusterfuck of whatever was happening in the Pokemon anime at the time. Daisy was traveling through Kanto with Ash and co, but the world revolved around her. tl;dr of her history was that she somehow ran Silph Co, was Professor Oak’s assistant and half fairy (yes in the Pokemon world). 

The edits to these are minimal, mostly just fixing small spelling errors or inserting words where some clarification was needed.

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Deviantart at it’s finest.

ToxicLove Storyline by xXRoleplayingRulesXx

Ah, I was simply browsing deviantart’s newest (or should I say FINEST) when I came across this “gem”. 

"My OC ToxicLove

ToxcLove. A demon monster girl. Her true two forms a dragon. and Witch. When Tox was alittle girl she mastered everything in school and graduated at the age of 15. Growing up on her own. After her parents died. she stayed with her grandmother until she died of the age of 156. Tox got a tattoo on her shoulder of a toxic waste sign. She adores everything about the Toxic waste land. She knows that saving the planet is a good thing. but you cant take her away from it. Tox met another demon like herself and took her to the underworld. She now lives there but in her own town area. filled with darkness. After she turned 22 and stopped aging. She started making her own clothing. and learning spells. She got an undead cat from hell and it helped her with her expiremnts being her little helper.

If you wish to know more just ask~

Name: Toxic Love

age: 22 years (102)

Personality: Dark,emo,frilly but not SO frilly. only in her some designs.

Style: Emo/Gothic.”

Name: Maria Leemaster
Birth: October 31, 1991
Sex: Female
Hair color: Brown, Red and blue
Eye Color: Black
Other: Undead Sayain werewolf
Born: Planet Vegeta
Powers: Teleport, Invisible, Elements, Heal, Transform any animal, Turns undead.
Extras: Is a slave, Already dead, Is a werewolf.
Friends: Krillin, Bulma, Vegeta
Enemy: Chi chi
Best Friend and love: Son Goku
Relatives: Lucas & Liru
Weapons: Blade, Hunter Bow, Staff, & Claws

(I apologize if this post gets long)

Holy crap, this thing…

So this is the creator’s self-insert that she has used to fandom-hop into various different fictional worlds including, but not limited to:

-Dragonball: Here she is paired with Goku and, from what I’ve seen, Vegeta seems to have a crush on her as well despite them both being married (Guess that would explain why Chi Chi is her “rival”). She is also an “undead sayain werewolf” thing and is Frieza’s slave

-Legend of Zelda: According to what the suethor stated, here the sue just teleports from the Dragonball worldinto the LoZ world with no explanation and she and Link just randomly fall in love

-Sonic the Hedgehog: For this one, the suethor tends to pair her self-insert with another of her Sonic OCs, but will occasionally pair her with Scourge (I know that Scourge tends to be a big flirt, but at this point, he’s already in a relationship with Fiona)

And finally she’s also inserted her sue into Lion King, but she has SO MANY DAMN RECOLORS that I can hardly tell who’s who. It also doesn’t help that she tends to give very little in the way of a description and that she tends to call what appears to be the same OC different names (I think the insert for this one might be Scar’s daughter and is a lioness princess or something? I don’t know man she’s got like three different Lion King OCs named “Maria”)

But yeah, there’s that horror story

Oh hi!! I drew Araki again ;333333; my bby oh god I want to upload more but damn school is the reason of my artblocks more like assblocks
meh I did a full body with him bcuz when friends want to draw him they are like do u have a full body? and I’m like lol nope so here is him! btw he is NOT a girl! he’s a fabulous sparkling gay boy so plz so now info abot him bcuz ye






Oh hi!! I drew Araki again ;333333; my bby oh god I want to upload more but damn school is the reason of my artblocks more like assblocks
meh I did a full body with him bcuz when friends want to draw him they are like do u have a full body? and I’m like lol nope so here is him! btw he is NOT a girl! he’s a fabulous sparkling gay boy so plz so now info abot him bcuz ye
Name: Araki Noriaki
Age: 13
Info: he is the most gayest thing you ever saw in your live nah jk he’s adorbs and will love evryone but he doens’t really likes people at all so ye 
he’s parents are dead they died when Araki’s house was burning and Araki’s bf came to rescue him but when they were going to rescue his parents they were dead but not by the fire Araki’s bf saw that they were already dead but something killed them DUN DUN DUUN and he has been in the care of his bf (boyfriend fuk ye) since he was small like 8-9 years old plus no marie su plz nu he’s just fab 
species: NOT a neko he’s half raindrop’sloid half Drealia (own species that might look like cats but they are a mixed animal species also they own powers and an special ability)
Special ability: he controls the wind and dreams/nightmares so he’s quite dangerous!
likes: you, free and carefree live, forests rocks everything
dislikes: idk fire, closed spaces//yes he has that phobia in which I don’t remember the name fuck) he hates but hates with a big H the smell of smoke (like me ew I hate that smell ugh I can’t handle it when I see someone smoking i’m like e_e)
Sorry if I sound stupid its night and I get high at nights haha ovo”
EDIT*! his heigh its 2 fucking meters bby he’s an species of mine and all are 2 meters when they’re 10+ more haha he’s 2.64 meters bby but you don’t necesary need to draw him like a giant lol

The owner of this OC isn’t joking either. They’re serious about using him as their main RP character. FOR YAOI. HE’S 13!