I played the your name the hedgehog game on DA. I found a mary-sue-OC-making deviant. Her name is Bubblegum the cat.
This character probably barfs rainbows.
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I played the your name the hedgehog game on DA. I found a mary-sue-OC-making deviant. Her name is Bubblegum the cat.
This character probably barfs rainbows.
I love this site~
It’s time for me to confess to my sins. I’ve put this off for far too long.
This here, is Colors the Cat, a Sonic the Hedgehog OC. She was a… thing I made back when I was 8 or 9, about three years ago. Sometimes I wish I had never found that character maker. I never even remotely fleshed out my OCs during that time, and she was a self-insert to the point where when I didn’t just say her name, I said she was “Me As A Sonic Character”, as I did with most of my OCs. As you can see, it looks like a unicorn puked on a bloody cat corpse. And then it sprouted wings and became a Sonic character. Literally, everything ever I made had to have wings and rainbows. So essentially, she was pals with all the Sonic characters, at first she was closest friends with Knuckles, but as I realized being red(my fav color) a favorite character does not make. So as I entered my “Tails Doll” phase, she had an evil doll form(!) and also could turn the Tails Doll good.(!!!) Also, on Roblox I said people could call me either by my username, or by the name Colors, making especially sure to state it was my Sonic OC who could control all the colors and rainbows and holy shit she godmodded and why did I do this and nothing is beautiful and everything hurts.
Also, I made a version for my sister, which is pretty much THE EXACT SAME THING but blue. Why.
I’m planning on making Sonic fancomics in which she shows up as a prominent character. Hoo boy, this is gonna be a wild ride.
It’s certainly not the worst sue I’ve seen but then again this chick must have loads of money because all I see anywhere when I look up pictures of Ezreal are pictures of EzrealXMareina. And this pairing is apparently popular too! The only reason people like it though is because the creator bought a TON of commissions of her OC and Ezreal. It was starting to get on my nerves so I thought it was about time someone reveled the sue/self insert for what she truly was.
Other Names: Mareina su Asrantiel, Mareina Dreamwalker, The Dreamwalker
Birthplace: Earth, Amethos Dandeca (formerly known as USA)
Birthdate: Earth Year 2791
Religious Beliefs: Agnostic
Race: Human (Dragon)
Special Abilities: Dragon forms, ice magic, dreamwalking, minor healing
Weaknesses: Heat, fire, illusions, poison, curses
Background: Lives on Earth with her brother Lansen, has a normal life with no friends. Has a ‘go-with-the-flow’ attitude on just about everything and doesn’t take much seriously. Always tries to advance herself when possible, and easily accessible. Her parents were killed in a mysterious accident when she was a child, but neither she nor Lansen knows the details of how they were killed.
Personality: Open-minded, loud, cheerful, honest, blunt, careless, clumsy, warm-hearted, curious, lazy, adventurous (when motivated), silly, stubborn, hot-headed, dependent, free-willed, dreamer, idealist, insecure, easily offended
Likes: Sleeping, dreaming, eating, learning new things, ice, flying, stories, free stuff
Hates: Working, fighting, walking, being teased*, being lectured, know-it-alls, feeling stupid, the weak, getting involved, killing
*secretly likes being teased by Ezreal and Lansen
Part I – The Origin of Power
Mareina’s power is granted to her through her dragon necklace. The gem in the necklace contains the lost soul of the last Revernite Dragon, Dreamwalker – also known as Asrantiel. Asrantiel’s spirit was sealed within a massive blue crystal and sealed inside of the Myrzarek Crystal Caverns.
The dragon spirit awakened when Mareina came in contact with it, asking for power to save a mortally wounded Ezreal. The power of her will, her dreams, called upon Asrantiel and thus the dragon was absorbed into the blue gem held within the silver dragon’s claws – the gem is also made from Revernite, but it is so far unknown how this is possible, since Revernite only exists in Revaltia.
Mareina received the dragon necklace from her mother at a very young age, but cannot recall the events clearly – even Lansen doesn’t know much about it, except that she bought it from a market from a vendor who sold medieval-type trinkets.
Part II – Dragon’s Birth
In the later chapters, Mareina is experimented upon by a mad scientist and injected with high doses of dragon-essence and blood. She is temporarily driven insane and upon enduring further experiments, is transformed into a baby dragon – her memories were lost in the process.
Later, Mareina is rescued by Ezreal and a mysterious vampire noble named Zerryn, but she could only speak in broken Draconic and Common. Together, the three escape from the scientist’s lair after he is slain and part ways with the vampire.
After defeating the Ghost King Eidolan, Lansen restores Mareina’s memory with the power of a Teracite – a magic rock made from the spirit essence of a magical creature. Reunited, the group leaves the Mindoto of Zervanth and moves on to Aglacia.
Mareina separates from the group, being drawn to a distant mountain which the Snowfeather Harpies named Hope Mountain – a place for those who are lost to seek guidance from the spirits of the old gods.
Ezreal travels to Hope Mountain with Mareina and when they reach the summit, nothing happens, but after several minutes, Mareina has a series of strange visions. She sees memories of the Revernite Dragon living within her gem, but she has no idea of this.
Once the visions fade, Mareina transforms into a full Revernite Dragon, unlocking all of her draconic powers at last and re-enabling her to turn back into a human; unfortunately, Asrantiel has begun to fuse with Mareina, thus changing her human appearance slightly.
Part III – The World of Revaltia
Mareina and her brother Lansen were transported to the world of Revaltia when a series of falling stars collided with Earth – the stars were actually fragments of the dream world that exists around Earth, formed by the dreams of humans, yet unseen.
The fragments were caused to fall by an unknown entity that seeks to wield the power of dreams and nightmares to twist the universe into a chaotic abyss of peoples’ worst fears. Thus far, Mareina is the only person who knows that Revaltia, a world created from the fusion of Earth and the dream world, was never meant to exist.
A dark force draws closer to Mareina and Lansen, they are warned by the Snowfeather Harpies to be wary as they continue forward in their journies on Revaltia – a dangerous road lay ahead, but they have no idea just what kind of madness awaits them.
Part IV – Mareina and Ezreal
When Mareina first arrives in Revaltia, she is separated from her brother and searches for him. Along the way, she encounters Ezreal – at first sight, she is interested in learning more about him but feels shy. Still, she feels that she has some kind of connection with him, and hopes he will tag along for a while.
When the two are pulled away from Madora Beach by an unknown rift, they are taken to Myrzarek, the home of the dragons, and tasked with traveling to the Frostlands. Their relationship quickly advances as they travel through the snow, but Mareina insists that Ezreal is a mere dream. He comforts her by saying “Even if I was a dream, I’d always be with you… because you believe in me.”
They continue on to find Asrantiel’s spirit crystal, but on the way Ezreal protects Mareina from falling rocks and is mortally wounded in the process. He lay bleeding on the cold floor and pleads for Mareina to stay away from the odd crystal. She ignores him obtains Asrantiel’s power to just barely bring Ezreal from the brink of death.
As they journey back to Myrzarek, they find the dragons slaughtered and all the Revernite crystals looted from the caves. They find a demonness named Rynkhat who is responsible for the dragons’ deaths and Mareina charges, blinded by her anger and is quickly dispatched by the powerful demonness.
Mareina’s body turns to dust, but a single shard of her wing remains – the crystal containing her dream and love for Ezreal. He tries to fight Rynkhat in vain and she disappears to destroy the caves so that he will be crushed. When all hope is lost, he picks up the shard and it glows in his hand, and miraculously he is transported to safety.
Ezreal reunites with Lansen and they face a number of trials before finally reaching an ancient, hidden library called the Atheneum. There they search for a powerful being of light to revive Mareina, but Rynkhat interferes and kills the being, using its blood combined with other elements to create a demon Mareina to use as a minion. However, the shard from her wing purifies her mind and gives her control of her body, though her appearance is that of a demon.
Rynkhat is about to kill them all, but Elle arrives with a new companion named Kochi, the baby dragon hatched from an egg that Ezreal saved in the wake of Myrzarek’s destruction. The dragon, blessed with the Boon of Arenka sung by Elle, now has the abilities to create rifts to other Mindoto. He creates a rift, and again everyone is separated when they are sent to Elvarne.
Mareina and Ezreal arrive in the Valley of the Dryads, and are captured by hunter dryads. They are taken to the High Priestess Aykorsia who is actually a demon hiding under the form of the real Priestess whom was murdered.
The demon tricks Ezreal into believing that he must drink a concoction created from Mareina’s blood and other elements in order to enter the Firefly Glade and travel to the lost shrine of the guardian spirit Fiola in order to find a cure for the demonic curse. Mareina’s body was held still by an invisible force as she tried to stop Ezreal, but her efforts were wasted.
Ezreal drank the potion and slowly began the painful transformation into a horrific demon. Mareina tries to kill the demon, but she calls on her warriors to restrain them both and orders them to be executed.
Just as they were about to be killed, their companion Hua Po arrived and freed them – Mareina carried Ezreal away with the help of her demonic strength and fled together with the red fairy to the Firefly Glade. As she spoke with Hua Po and the peculiar cursed goblins within the Glade, Ezreal was motionless and speechless as his mind was lost in a battle with the demon curse.
Mareina was sent to Fiola’s Shrine along with Ezreal to free the guardian who was trapped by the demon who invaded Elvarne. She trekked through the mentally-agonizing mist towards the shrine, where dark voices whispered temptations into her mind.
Mareina’s dark energy is slowly drained out by the evil mist, and thus her life fades quickly. She rages in anger at the sleeping deity for its uselessness, but her resolve awakens Fiola in the end. Mareina begs the deity to cure Ezreal’s curse, but Fiola says that the curse is rooted deep within his mind, meaning that his memories of Mareina will be erased with its removal.
Fiola cleanses both Mareina and Ezreal of the demon curse, but her power is completely used up and she fades to nothingness. Her final gift to Mareina is that Ezreal will retain his memories for as long as he remains in Firefly Glade – the fireflies were given Ezreal’s memories and are able to fill the missing parts of his memory.
Mareina is extremely depressed as they are sent back to Firefly Glade, leaving Ezreal confused. She is pessimistic, but Ezreal does his best to help her change her mind with a speech reminiscent of his mother:
"Fate is just another one of those things that tries to keep them apart, but no matter what, your heart will never forget – your heart will never turn away and run. Look at the stars…
Even though they seem so far apart, they are able to join together to form this amazing spectacle we see before us. As long as one continues to believe in someone, they will never truly disappear…
Like the stars in the night sky… I believe that no matter what tries to separate us, we will always come together again.”
Ezreal then confesses his love for Mareina and kisses her.
After a long while in Firefly Glade, the others meet up with Mareina and Ezreal and much to her discomfort, they enter a rift to the next Mindoto. Something goes wrong though, and they fall into an extremely powerful time-bending demon’s realm.
The demon sends Mareina and Ezreal back in time to a twisted version of Ezreal’s past which alters reality. In this past, Mareina lives out most of her life alongside Ezreal as an orphan. She meets Ezreal’s parents and learns of their unfortunate deaths – though they were slightly different in this altered timeline.
Voinera is completely destroyed and Mareina is met with the time demon, who promises Ezreal’s safety in exchange for the Revernite crystals on her wings. Mareina is given a knife and forced to cut off every last crystal from her wings, destroying all of her dreams and nearly ending her own life.
She was saved by the deity within Ezreal’s amulet, Anaketha, who was also able to restore Ezreal’s memories. She gave them her blessing before disappearing from the world and sending them off to fight the demon known as the Endless Nocturne.
The group was nearly defeated, but one of their allies sacrificed himself in order to temporarily put the Endless Nocturne in a state of temporary stasis-petrification. They mourned his loss, but were expelled from the nightmare realm shortly after.
They continued on to a strange Mindoto called Altinova, which turned out to be a madman’s creation; once he was dealt with, they moved on to a new Mindoto called Floresia. Here, everyone participated in an event known as the Dreamflower Hunt which eventually led to a celebration called the Dreamfield Revelries.
Here, Mareina and Ezreal shared a tender moment and made a promise to never keep secrets from the other.
The next day, the group was met by a mysterious being called a Petalin, who had finally been reunited with the lost soul of her human lover after the Dreamflower was returned to the Dreamfield Garden after so many years. The Petalin told many secrets to Mareina, including the creation of Revaltia.
As a final act of thanks, the Petalin revived Mareina’s parents, but they would live in Floresia without their memories of Earth until Revaltia came to an end – after that, they would be returned to Earth, their souls and bodies resurrected by the powerful fusion of dream and reality.
Mareina was confused after sharing the Petalin’s vast knowledge, and for a long time she was depressed because she never wanted to have to leave Ezreal. It pained her to know that Revaltia was never supposed to exist at all.
Finally, they depart from Floresia and arrive in Zervanth (see part I) and later, Aglacia.
Now, Mareina and company make their way to the merchant Mindoto known as Elterod to buy supplies to prepare themselves for the incoming dangers which the Snowfeather Elder warned them about.
First things first, I absolutely adore this blog! You guys are so funny, keep up the good work.
And now, time to introduce my very first oc (and sue) Mizuri Phan.
Some history behind her: I got into manga and anime by watching tokyo mew mew and mermaid melody. She was a tokyo mew mew fc at first, her mew name was mew mew blackberry, her animal was a plack panther and she could turn into her animal at will (here it comes, here it comes) but when I became a fan of mermaid melody I came up with a silly sue headcanon that she was someone uber important to keep storylines the way they should be and poof she travelled to the mermaid melody-verse.
-She can turn into a cat, a panther and a big black tiger.
-She can turn into a mermaid
-She can materialize shadows into a pair of wings
-Her eyes change colour when she’s angry
-She’s immortal and invincible. (forever 16 :D)
-She has dual wield pitch-black katanas, many scars and an angsty backstory to match it.
-She can manipulate shadows and the colour black and turn into a poof of shadows herself.
-She travels from world to world and is like reeeaaally important in every world and everyone likes her and even Sasuke wanted to have her around him.
-Did I forget to mention that she was a self-insert :>
Oh god I’m laughing so hard at myself and my weird little weabo phase, luckily I grew out of it and my characters are a’lot more balanced and a’lot less sue-ish.
Mizuri is still around, I couldn’t just get rid of my very first oc (you get some sort of special bond with the character that started it all).
So she got a huge makeover, both in abilities and personality (and a bit in appearance).
So I recently came across this thing on DA and couldn’t stop facepalming
The bio is pretty long, so for the sake of shortening this thing up a bit, I’ll erase useless trivia and comment along as you read the bio (My comments will be in bold italics)
Alright, let’s get this thing started:
GREAT. FUCKING. SCOTT. Possibly one of the WORST Mario Bros. sues that I have EVER seen. I don’t know where to even start
Let’s begin with the basics. This is Eve, the artist’s perfect, self-insert that she made strictly to be paired with/married to Mario. She has absolutely no personality, no back story, no ANYTHING. She’s just "OMG Mario’s perfect wife that he loves more than anyone else, even Peach!!!!". She is CONVINCED that she’s legit married to Mario and claims that she is “the ultimate, #1 Mario lover” constantly, brushing off other Mario lovers as “just fangirls who are after her husband”. She even claims that her sue was the first OC to have children with him and anyone else who does so with their OC’s are just copying. Really?
That’s another thing about this chick. She is absolutely obsessed with Mario. And I don’t mean, “just a fangirl”. I mean like unhealthily, creepily obsessed, to the point where she’ll go out of her way to compose long ass letters dedicated to Eve raving about how perfect and beautiful she is and SWEAR that “her husband Mario wrote them!!”. Here’s a little snippet of said letter:
I never met a girl like u ur sweet nice and beautiful I love talking to u ur so fun-spirited and is always in a good mood. Ur smile ur laugh evrything of u is beautiful and perfect every time we went on a date I can’t help but stare u look beautiful in evry dress and I know u don’t like to wear them but u wear them for me I don’t care that ur not girly I love u for u on every date every time i see u i go breathless of how gorgeous u look can’t believe an amazing girl like u was MADLY in love witha guy like me every time im with u nothing else matters I always love being with u and every time we’re apart I can’t get u out of my head I always wanted to be with u and every time u see me a beautiful smile comes to ur face which means ur always happy to see me too every laugh every kiss u have no idea wat each thing meant to me every time we hang out, i love being with u and u love being with me
She also has an “EVIL” side named Eva that she uses to pair with “Mr. M” (Mario version of Mr. L that she made up) in an attempt to give her sue a “bad boy”, cock tease version of Mario that she can drool over. This side of her can also bend lightning while her “normal” side can bend fire. YEAH. WISH I WAS JOKING TOO.
She’s best friends with Luigi (who has a crush on her of course), Peach (who on and off “hates her because she stole Mario from her, but is BFF’s with her anyways”), and Daisy (who has a crush on her too. No, I’m not joking this time either). She also has little sue/stu children with Mario in their “perfect family” named Carlos (a recolor of Baby Mario) and Penelope (who even has a dark side too I don’t even know anymore).
And last but not least, she’s a princess. Jesus
OK, so I had this character… She was a comical character who had the hots for Kirby— Kirby— and he couldn’t stand her. Sounds like an anti-Sue, but her entire shtick was that she was me. Oh, and “random XD”.
Her name was honestly Alice2, number and all, because that was my username. Everything revolved around her. She was hyperactive and got away with awful things because it was “random”. She had a rock band and a cool guitar + mad songwriting skillz, and was in every roleplay in every canon. Especially Sonic.
I have a million of these pictures. They’ve all got “love” in the filename.
I think she paints those curls on.
I used to love Maximum Ride so I had to HAD to redraw this one.
I think my favorite part of the post was “taking a safety pin she’d clipped to her shirt and digging the tracking chip out of her arm”. Dunno if a lil’ 14 year old could do that to herself without striking an artery/nerve/bone and be okay about it.
Urgh, were to even start with this thing…
So this is the artist’s self-insert (whose name I can’t mention due to being the artist’s name as well) that she likes to use to pair herself with her favorite Mario Bros. characters.
She’s Bowser’s daughter, is the princess of the Koopa Kingdom, and likes to pair herself with Iggy Koopa (Oh God, doesn’t that technically count as incest???), Kamek and Fawful, though Fawful is her favorite victim (They’re currently “boyfriend and girlfriend”)
Though it doesn’t really matter because she usually just has these three characters fight over whose going to date her/be her boyfriend
It’s quite embarassing, but I found this old drawing of mine.
I was like… 14, I guess? But anyway, this was my Crash Bandicoot OC, N.Emy, also known as Lady Cortex.
She was an young evil scientist, best friend of Nina Cortex and Neo Cortex’s loyal wife.
I remember she had a terrible backstory about being abandoned in the Evil Academy and raised by N.Brio, who always had only bad words for her.
…and of course, she was also a self-insert.
What the fuck past!me.
Hoo boy, THIS thing…
So, hopefully if you were able to read the info in the picture, this thing is a fan child of Mimi and Dimentio from Super Paper Mario.
NEITHER of those two characters are even remotely the parenting type, especially Dimentio. Both are extremely self centered, so how they were even able to come together to conceive a child (which the stuthor doesn’t even bother to explain) is beyond me
Oh but it gets better!
Up above is a list of the various powers that he possesses. Firstly, he is WAY too overpowered. Not even the main antagonist had this many! Secondly, his “powers” are nothing but a lazy mish-mash of his “parent’s” powers, with extra shit thrown in because why not. He even has a “true form”!
His info and personality are nothing to sneeze at either:
Age: young adult
Occupation: None at the moment (wants to be a Fortune Teller)
Relationship Status: In a relationship
Personality: Quiet, can have low self-esteem, sarcastic when he wants to be, stays away from violence, tries to hide emotions, likes to be around other people, trustworthy, polite, and very kind towards others (when he wants to be).
Family: Mimi (mother), Merlee (aunt), O’Chunks (uncle), Nastasia (aunt)
Friends: Lili (likes more than just a friend ;3), that’s it :<
Enemies: The net full of crabs >: (
Likes: Spending time with Lili, DS, cheesecake, leather coats, Snivy, music, Wallace Wells, fancy hats, cold weather, CAESCHEcartoons’s artwork, sunsets, old movies, manga, Kirby games.
Dislikes: Jewels, fishing, mint chocolate chip flavored anything, 3-D movies, SPM fanfics, gender bent characters, people who correct spelling mistakes
Doesn’t seem so bad right? Maybe a little on the generic and boring side, but at least it’s not too bad, right? Nope.
One of the stuthor’s absolute favorite things to do when answering questions about his FC is to gush over how “flawed and tortured” his character is. And what I mean by “gush” is that he’ll do it literally every chance that he gets.He’s bullied, he’s unattractive, his powers are so powerful that he’s “dangerous”, he has low self-esteem, he’s “too caring” (he literally put this as a flaw!). At this point, this thing is an anti-stu
And as if it wasn’t bad enough, it also has hints of self-insert as well. Many of the likes/dislikes/responses that the stuthor has made for Timmy are also opinions that the stuthor holds themselves
Blegh, anyway, please enjoy!
On the subject of Xiaolin Showdown Mary Sues…
Name: Dywen (aka my name rearranged. real creative, huh?)
Age: 12 (how old I was when I made her)
Favorite Shen Gong Wu: The one she is holding. Whoever can guess what it is and what her element is gets a prize.
Likes: Cats, the color blue, and Raimundo
Xtras: Both Clay and Raimundo like her and argue over her.
God I was so horrible. Why???
And I got so upset when I got flamed/trolled.
SHE WAS BLIND WITH THE MOST TRAGIC BACKSTORY YOU COULD EVER IMAGINE WHY 12-YEAR-OLD ME WHYYYYY
[found this gem after coming across the ‘google your name + hedgehog’ post]
"Mori the demon hedgehog~single~"
Likes-Pure darkness,anything that includes the deaths of many people,taste of blood.
Powers-Can b able to manipulate and control males and she can even command them to kill themselves.
Mori-Hey.*shows fangs sexily*
Trey-I wish u’d find a bf and stop killing almost 2 million people.”
[slowdowntherespeed racer that;s about the size of a small country]
Ummmm ya this is Maya shes a super high school level demon…… but ALSO A LOLI!!! MUAHAHAHA lol im wierd
:l she likes ishimaru and stalks him like a stalker. =w= she’s also yandere so… yeaahh…
so she starts OUT as a shsl loli but then like ishida she turns into shsl DEMON she likes art and food but she doesnt ever gain sooo DEMONS DONT GAIN WAIT SILLY!!! XD ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmm ya i think thats it for now LOL
maya (c) me
dangan ronpa (c) whoever made it..
I still have no idea if this person is serious or not
(I cannot take this Mega Man X, a science-fiction video game about sentient robots and war, fancharacter seriously at all whenever I see her RP with people on my Dash. My comments are all in italics, all of this was directly copy+pasted from her page.)
Name: Alpha Sacaro
(Apparently her real name is Keiko and she was named Alpha by her animal friends. Why would animals name her Alpha…?)
Height: 5 foot 3
(Species, age, and height are normal at least.)
Hair: white with silver highlights
(White hair? If that’s not dyed and she’s not albino or aging abnormally, then there’s something weird going on here. Silver highlights I’ll buy if she dyed it.)
Eyes: Blue, but can change to red when I lose my calm.
(Eyes change color like a mood ring? Her species should be changed to human/mood ring hybrid.)
skin: pale with multiple scars on my arms, back and legs.
(She lives in the forest; she’s not going to be super pale.)
History: when I was 5 years old my family, as well as half the district I lived in was attacked by a swarm of Mavericks, unfortunately I was the only one of my family to survive this attack.
(Normal for MMX, at least.)
Not long after that I was found by an old man, who I later found out was a scientist who specialized in the human and reploid mind.
(Humans and Reploids are two completely different species. Humans are organic. Reploids are machines. You won’t find one person specializing in them both.)
He claimed he wanted to help me forget what happened, but he only made me relive that memory for months on end before I finally snapped and ended up lashing out at whatever posed as either a threat to me, or anyone who angered me. Sometimes I can control it by remembering what little good memories I still have, but sometimes, when the memories rush back all at once, I can’t hold it back and I literally become a puppet to whatever is “living” in my mind.
(Why did this happen? Oh yes, solely to give your character an even more tragic or angsty past and excuse their behavior out of trauma, nevermind that losing their parents at five was traumatizing enough! And now you have multiple personality disorder and insanity for… what reason again?)
I currently live in the forest with my animal friends.
(I didn’t know that she was Snow White! If she’s insane and has been living in a forest raised by animals since she was five, she would not have the grasp of English that her character seems to have. In fact, she would be a feral child, and could not learn how to be civilized again when she’s fifteen.)
I rarely enter the city unless I feel as if I should try and warn the people or at least try to find help. Most of the time however, the ones who agree to help me die after my memories kick in, which almost never takes long. Whenever I am injured or being given medical attention, I lash out at the person who hurt me or whoever is trying to help me. The reason for this is because of the scientist who caused me to go insane from his torturous deeds towards me.
(Warn people about what? If it’s you that you’re warning about, why not just stay in the forest away from them? I mean, you end up killing everyone that tries to help you almost immediately.)
Likes: Animals, Helping people (when I can stay sane long enough to do it)
Dislikes: People (I just don’t trust them), Reploids (I just don’t trust them that much.)
(Wait, you like to help people, but you dislike people and don’t trust them? How does this even make sense?)
Abilities: I can communicate with all animals, use crystal shards to protect or heal myself (Green=shield, Blue=weapon, Red/white=healing) and also can call upon the spirit of a phoenix to aid me.
(Why? This is science-fiction world, not a fantasy world, and this is a /human/ - okay, human/mood ring hybrid. She should not be able to communicate with all organic animals, randomly summon crystal shards and attack/defend/heal herself with them, or summon phoenixes as a human in the MMX world.)
(Also in a good number of the RPs, she has random NPCs and one canon character hating on her - by throwing glass bottles at her, to be honest - for no actual reason other than she’s in the city and to tell whichever character she’s interacting with that everyone hates her. To top it off, even if her biography says that she lashes out when attacked, in the RPs, she just cringes and starts crying. If she rarely enters the city, then WHY do so many of her RPs start there? How did she learn English living in the forest with animals all by herself?)
(My final thoughts? This character has no logic and does not make sense.)