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We've all made them.
And they have some angsty terrible past.

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Angel Iron Man OC

( I was looking at Marvel OCs on deviantArt when I found this gem. It’s nothing short of creepy. )

Name: Angel Starlin Bain
Alias: Dark Fighter
Age: 16
Profession: Student
Height: 174 cm
Weight: 49 kg
Gender: Female
Eyes: Brown
Hair: Brown
Particular signs: scar on his forehead caused by a battle 
Relationships: Tony Stark
Citizenship: Italian
Marital status: Single
Education: Hi-Tech Academy
Place of Birth: Venice, Italy
Place of Residence: Malibu, USA
Style: Rock or Gothic style
Curiosities: high knowledge at technology and robotics engineering 

Personality: Sarcastic, megalomaniac, smart, ironic, adventuros, hides her sentiments, lonely, silent, sincere

Biography

Angel is a young student and she was born in Venice (Italy).
Angel is stubborn and she doesn’t give up.
She likes technology, and loves Tony Stark.
She lived in Italy until the age of thirteen, then she moved to New York and after to Malibu.
While in New York, she met Justin Hammer, and she decided to work for Hammer.
Every night, she went to Stark Industries to steal secret information about Iron Man.
But, one night, she saw Tony Stark and fell in love with him.
With the information he had stolen, he decided to build an armor.
She returned to Hammer Industries and canceled all information, she moved to Malibu.
In Malibu, she made her armor, and she enrolled in a school: Hi-Tech Academy.
One day, Tony Stark went to Hi-Tech Academy for a robotic lesson, even though Angel was an expert in robotics, pretended not to know nothing for be helped by Tony. 
For a moment Tony saw her grades and realized that this was only an excuse, but he did not care.
Every day, Tony watched Angel, and over time Tony fell in love with her.
The last day of school, there was a party, Angel was sit when Tony arrived and asked her to dance.
She accepted. When the party was finished, Tony asked her to go to is home but she refused.
Tony managed to persuade her only a kiss. At Tony’s house, they laughed and talked until late at night, later, they slept together (they only slept, they didn’t do bad anything).
From that night, they began to go out together. 
One night, while Angel testing her armor, she saw that Iron Man was in trouble and decided to help him. Iron Man asked her name, but she started to run away, after a long chase she managed to escape.
From that night, all the world but especially Tony asks: Who is Dark Fighter???

At least there’s no OCxCanon… right?

Wrooooooooooooooooooooooooong.

'Marry' is paired with Snape.

Kirikateku Dragneel (FTOC)

OMG! Yes, I know this look like Natsu with purple hair and eyes, but this is how this Gary Sue creator design him. -_- Alright, let’s move on to the real topic. I found this guys profile on the owners profile and boy do I want to smack the owner of this Gary Sue, let’s dive in on this Gray Sue.

Name : Kirikateku Dragneel
Alias’ : Belphegor, Salamander

Okay, I don’t even know if his name is a real name, but I do know he can’t be a Dragneel since Natsu is the only Dragneel from getting the name from Igneel. Also, he can’t be called Salamander, that is Natsu’s name.

Age : 18
Gender : Male
Magic : Fire Dragon slayer, White Dragon Slayer, Shadow Dragon Slayer, Fire Devil Slayer, Fire God Slayer, Heavenly Body, Gravity, Memory Make, Re-quip (swords and other hand to hand weapons) Arc Of Time

Okay, age and sex is okay, I guess, but he can’t have that many different types of magic!!! One, he only gets one! -_- He can’t be a Fire Dragon Slayer because Natsu is the only one and if your character was one it would mess up Natsu as a canon. -_- He can’t have White Dragon Slayer because that is Sting’s and Sting killed the last known dragon of that type and again it would be like in Natsu’s case. -_- Shadow Dragon Slayer is Rogue’s and it goes on the same line for Stings. -_- Really, Fire Devil Slayer? No! There has only been one Devil Slayer in the series and that is Silver, so just stop. Fire God Slayer? No, just, no. Natsu kills the only know Fire God Slayer. -_- The rest he can’t have. You can only have one, uno, and etc out of all of these. Requip is logical, but none of the others. -reads more- F@#$, the Reequip makes no since, he’s either sword or gun. Nothing more on that. -_- -rubs my head from a pounding headache-

Guardians : Natsu Dragneel, Lucy Heartfilia

Guardians? What do you mean by this, if your many parents there is no way on this Earth they can be since he is 18!!! DX

Hair colour : Purple
Eye colour : Dark Purple, Blood Red (when in demon form)

I guess the hair color is fine, but how the living crap does he even have a demon form? -_- That isn’t listed in the unrealistic magic list you have. So your saying he has magic like Mirajane Struess too. -_-

Guild : Fairy Tail (Century Class Mage)

Is there even a Century Class Mage in the Fairy Tail series? If so this is the first I’ve heard of it.

Guild mark location : Left side of chest 
Likes : Kaira Lockheart, Fighting, Becoming stronger, My friends, My team
Dislikes : Transport, Getting soaked, Dark Guilds

I guess the Guild Mark Location is fine, but seriously? I can understand liking a person, but you likes after that are so over done and should be explained, not just thrown together. -_- Not every Dragon Slayer get’s Motion Sickness, so him disliking transport at a low level like he should be should bother him. Getting soak? Seriously, your copying Gray now. Dark Guilds seem like the only legit dislike, but again you should explain WHY!?!

Okay, I’m done, I know know how you guys that do this all the time can handle this bs.

open up for a creepypasta sue ? I found her while strolling around. 
people won’t realize that creepypasta is meant to be CREEPY not CUTE

Her full name is Marble Burned , she’s 17 years old and something like BEN Drowned’s little sister.
She’s very shy around new people but if she made friends with someone she is very open-minded.

she also stutters because of her so called ‘shyness’ 

And here’s my first Zelda fancharacter!

She has basically all the hallmarks of that fandom’s sue profile. She had a fourth Triforce, the Triforce of Time (represented by the BORDER of the Triforce not the center triangle wasn’t I so original??)

She was selected at birth by the Goddess of Time. Oh yeah she was human and from Earth and was magically transported to Hyrule where she fell in love with Vaati and then became best friends with the Four Swords Links. Then they betrayed her and used her to kill Vaati, except Vaati survived and returned a couple years later and she taught him how to be not evil.

Then this prince from her original world came and kidnapped her to marry her and Vaati went and fought him to the death for Hayley back and then they returned to Hyrule and built a new castle in the Wind Ruins and had three kids together.

Oh yeah and she had the power to stop time. With her Triforce.

Alright, let’s play ‘remember your old sues and suffer’. Best game, I know.

Years ago, in a galaxy far far away, I was into one specific anime; Sailor moon.

I started out with a cutesy thing where my OC was “Sailor Star” or “Sailor Pink Star” since I don’t remember which one. I’m going with Star since it seems the less-sue option. In weeaboo!me’s defense, I didn’t know about Star Fighter and them since I only had watched the English episodes. She was based off of me with brown hair and blue eyes, and was a transfer student from America who ended up meeting Serena and went to her home and ended up teased by her little bro. Then they went for ice cream and oh no someone’s attacking and Luna magically appeared and suddenly magical girl. She could send stars as attacks, and was one of the strongest scouts but not stronger than Serena.

Another sailor sue I had, I don’t remember her name so I’m gonna call her Sailor Dark. Anyway, her job was apparently to kidnap Darien since for some odd reason, she was kidnapped and turned into a dark scout or whatever. She would fake like she was returning to normal and grab Darien when he ran over to check on her.

I will never stop…

Here’s my Five Nights At Freddy’s Oc: Robin the Scarlet Macaw.
Robin is a large Macaw and about Bonnie’s weight.he has blue and yellow wings on his arm.Robin has a very long tail with a sharp tip at the end.
Before the bite of 87: he used to say what the children says to him in a funny high pitch voice.he also dance when the band plays in a funny way and that makes the kids dance along with him.
When the bite happened: Robin was turned off and ripped apart.his remains were in the backstage around the place but he was turn on and put back together by Bonnie,Chica,Foxy and Freddy.they also shoved a 18 year old boy into him.
What he does during the night watch: it’s unknown where he is because you can’t see him for awhile but he is there but his shadow.you can see him after looking in the cameras for 3 times.he will appear in the dinning room,looking away from the player in a pose like he was about to fly off but the second time his head will turn to the camera like a owl.he’ll been standing in the middle of the right.but he doesn’t go to the window or door but his shadow will been seen if you turn on the light.he attacks like Bonnie and Chica but in the same way instead he’ll be above the player and screams and kills the player but he doesn’t do the “Bwaah!” Noise.he does a high and demonic squawk.
Abilities: his tail is so long and he stabs the player’s chest and sometimes you can see his tail is the restrooms.
Squawking: he squawks instead of “bwah!” You can hear his soft,slow squawks near you’re right door that means he’s there.
He was created by a 32 year old man named Robin Skyes (he was named after his creator) he loved bird and his favourite was Scarlet Macaws,so Robin the Scarlet Macaw.but he was killed 6 weeks later,so he doesn’t know what Robin become.
Robin (like Foxy) is most active when the cameras were off.

*long sigh* at the request of J, I will just rapid spam FNAF oc’s because I know where they all live and hid and they cannot escape me. I think the bio’s speak for themselves…

Inspired by X’s ’Five Nights at Freddy’s’ OC Robin, I decided to make my OC for the game (before you ask, NO I AM NOT PLAYING THAT GAME EVER!!!! DX)

Oh…okay. No yeah lets make a character for a game that you’ve never played. I mean you can do your research but you’ll learn more through the game…

Penny is a platypus (of course I would try to design a Platypus animatronic) with brown fur and a brown bill with a bow on her head.

Before the bite of ‘87: Penny was a character who was a little shy about her job, but eventually when she opened up, she loved being around the kids. She would let them climb her arms due to her sturdy build, and would aid them if they got hurt after tripping on the floor or getting a cut from something sharp.

I like how people write them up like they’re actual human beings. You know before these kids supposedly possessed them they had normal AI. And they probs wouldn’t have to adapt to their surroundings. They changed because they were haunted. Basically any OC for this game breaks cannon…you know why…


When the bite happened: Once the bite happened, as much as the company wanted her to stay at Freddy’s, they couldn’t trust animatronics to help the needed, so they shut her down, dismantled her, disconnected her wires, and placed her in box near the electronic room. Eventually, like Robin, she was rebuilt, but unlike all the animatronics she has a different purpose.

BTW Robin is another bad character too I’ll submit later. So why would they dismantle her and then rebuild her? Looking at it from the standpoint of someone who works with these, if you’re rebuilding them it’s for a good reason. Rebuilding them for the sake of plot convenience is not a good enough reason. If they didn’t like having animations because of the Bite then they would’ve scrapped her ass faster than you can say Chuckie Cheese Pizza…

What she does at night: She’s always in the corner of the room the player (or Mike) is at, mostly behind the blind spots of the camera. What she does is wait for either Bonnie or Chica to be at the doors of the room Mike is in. If the player doesn’t respond to the door button in time, Penny will tackle Bonnie or Chica away from the door and give the player a freebie or a second chance at protecting themselves, however, she will only do that once in the game, the second you see Bonnie or Chica at your door, you’re on your own. Penny will only do this on Night 1 and 2, on Night 3 is when Freddy and the gang destroy her and when Bonnie and Chica stand at your door, they will hold Penny’s head by the wires. Foxy and Freddy do the same thing, but once they enter the room you can see them holding her head. Night 4 and 5 is when it gets different; Penny comes back, but she isn’t the same as she was. After being rewired by Freddy and his friends she turns on the player. She will tackle Bonnie or Chica only to return to your room and take you to the electronic room herself. And once she closing in on the player, her eyes simply glow red and cause the screen to static (the way it normally does).

I do not like this Sam I Am… So she saves you? No that would make it less terrifying. Giving the player extra time to react defeats the purpose of the game. And also if you don’t react quick enough, Bonnie and Chica lock your doors so you can’t shut them. So either way your still screwed. And what about if they’re both there? Does she ever stop Foxy? Like…flaws…flaws everywhere…

And Freddy isn’t smart enough to rewire and ENTIRE audio animatronic just to be an asshole. That’s not what they’re “programmed” to do.

EDIT: Almost forgot about Nights 6 and 7! Oppsy! Let me explain. On night 6, Penny somehow hurt her circuitry and was able to get the wire Freddy and his friends put on her disconnected from her system and realized what she was doing to the player and remained hidden so she wouldn’t scare Mike (not even protecting him sadly). Night seven though, is when it got different, when she realized Freddy was going to plan the major attack, she helped the player three times (even against Foxy). However, on the fourth attempt to save the player you would see her tackle Bonnie, Chica, or Foxy and through the cameras you would see a fight between Penny and Bonnie, Chica, or Foxy. Unfortunately, Penny doesn’t come out of the fight victorious; the other animatronics dismantle her body once more with no intention of rebuilding her again. However, if you don’t use up all her assisting abilities, and if your lights go out, she will fight Freddy to give you more time to hope for 6AM to arrive. You will see the fight too through their glowing eyes and hearing their metal clash at each other, but it won’t last for the entire night so just hope she is able to hold Freddie and his gang until 6AM arrives.

This was long winded and rather pointless. This whole character seems really stupid for being part of a horror game. She just saves the player numerous times so they can say “Oh shit I almost died!” like, that defeats the purpose of the game…


Abilities: With her build, she’s able to knock down the animatronics fast enough to protect the player, and fast enough to get out herself to get away from Freddy and his allies.

Appearances: When she rushes to hide from Freddy and his friends, she will look at Mike (or the player) with a scared look for them and run off again. She does this as though to warn them not to mess up again.

With how silly she looks and acts, most parents trusted her more than the other animatronics.

Five Nights at Freddy’s belongs to Scott Crawthon

Penny belongs to Me

And thats that… -.-

One day the twins started fightinf or Sachiko in hopes to win lover her love. Sachiko on the other hand is confused and worried about them.

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Twins: *Fighting*
Sachiko: B-Boys, Why are you fighting? Aren’t we all friends? *blushes softly*

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I hope you like it Neptune Wink Icon 
Sachiko (c) sakifuyumioc
Twins (c) thetrueazure 
Base: Lyon, Gray, Juvia

Well, I haven’t played the game myself but I did see a few clips of some gameplays of it. (Didn’t watch the whole videos though, too freaky… >w`<; ) But I do like the fan art being made of the animatronics~ X3 So inspired, I decided to create a character of my own with my SAI magic. But instead of an animal, my character is a doll, which makes it more creepier…~ :plotting: Her name is ‘Baby-Doll.’
Full Name: ’Baby-Doll’ (Jade)


Alias: The Doll


Occupation: Animatronic Children’s Entertainer/Singer


Powers/Skills: Can quickly rotate her head 180 degrees, both clockwise and anti-clockwise to view what’s behind her. Able to distract her victims with a disturbing melody to give fellow animatronics the chance to strike.


Hobby: Entertaining children/singing


BIO: ’Baby-Doll’ was once a normal human, a young adult named Jade who lived with her uncle. Despite losing her loving parents when she was fourteen, Jade had no trouble making friends. She first heard about Freddy Fazbear’s Pizza when reading an old article about the horrific event in 1987, when a customer was severely injured by one of the mascots. A week later, Jade was then invited to a friend’s child’s birthday party at the same place, finding it quite quaint but secretly creepy. 
One night however, a few of Jade’s closest friends decided to explore the restaurant after dark as a dare, and persuaded Jade to tag along. The dare backfired, unfortunately as they were all locked in and eventually, encountered by the animatronics during the late hours of the night. Witnessing her friends being brutally murdered one by one, Jade was the last to remain as she begged for mercy in song (mainly singing to calm her nerves. Singing was a hobby of Jade’s as well as baking) Intrigued by her sweet voice (especially Freddy) and sensing she had suffered enough, the animatronics offered Jade a deal - to become one of them. Work for them, and promise to remain at Freddy’s forever and her life will be spared. Jade hesitatingly agrees, giving her word and disappears with the antimatronics to ‘embrace’ her fate.
Jade was never found or seen again, along with the bodies of her friends. But the very next day, after their disappearance, there was a new addition the restaurant’s mascots - a petite animatronic doll with a frilly apron (a symbolization that she loved to cook and bake) which possesses a striking resemblance to the missing Jade. The name ‘Baby-Doll’ was given to her, due to her ‘charming’ appearance. The doll can be found on stage, singing with the other mascots or sometimes solo, which is very enchanting. How she came to be will never be known…and sometimes at night, an eery melody can be heard, drifting through the restaurant…a sharp head turning 180 degrees, both clockwise and anti-clockwise…grinning in the dark as a fatal distraction…~ :evillaugh:

If you don’t know who Akai is, she’s kinda like a milder, female version of Chris Chan. She made an FC X Canon paring called Sonai, and I will compare it to my own FC x Canon pairing, PikaLayton.
Layton stays in character. Sonic does not.
Pikachu isn’t a weak Mary Sue, but she can be powerful. Akai is a Victim Sue (the one that makes you feel bad foe them on purpose) and overpowered.
Most of my PikaLayton drawings are romantic, mostly kissing and holding hands. Sonai is just sexual things.
Layton likes Pikachu because she has helped him a lot, and because she can make him feel happy. “Sonic” merely likes Akai for her body.

if any of the Akai fans come here because you think I’m bullying her, think about what I’m saying. OC/FC x Canon is acceptable, but try to make sure the characters stay in character…

Akai does not belong to me.

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But,it’s not in character for Layton to fall for a pikachu.  It’s bestiality 

(Tigger warning: rape)

Found a NiGHTS sue. This thing is irritating.

So far, the suethor has a 10 chapter fanfic about her OC. But because it’s TEN chapters, I think that doing a Let’s Read of the whole thing would be too much. So instead, I decided that it would be better if I were to just describe to the best of my ability the sue’s backstory, with all information being taken from what I’ve read in the fic. I will also occasionally take snippets from said fic to aid in my description. This will be Part 1 of my description, so let’s get to it!

First thing’s first, I’ll start with the basics. The sue was originally a human named Dialla Ramsey. She’s apparently a 16 year old girl who is 5.2 and 107 lbs. (I was a little curious about those measurements. Correct me if I’m wrong, but based on what I’ve researched, this sue is seriously leaning towards being underweight!). However, the suethor just hand waves it as her being “small for her age”.

She also has the whole tragic backstory thing. Her mother cheated on her father and he left as a result. Surprise surprise, the father was also the stereotypical “good and kind parent” who believed in the sue’s crazy whimsical little fantasies about seeing NiGHTS related things in real life and he’s the only one who was ever kind to her and understood her and blah blah blah, you get the picture. The mother is the stereotypical “mean and evil parent”:

She ran a hand through her dark pink hair, wishing she had inherited her father’s royal blue. She had asked her mom into dying it that color but the woman wouldn’t have it.

"I don’t want to look at you and be reminded of him!" Her mother would say, then would always add with a bitter voice. "You act like him enough as it is."

To which Dialla would retort in her mind. ‘As apposed to being be a trollop like you, that can’t hold a relationship for more than a month? No thank you!’ But of course she would never says this out loud. She couldn’t stand to be slapped again. A punch was one thing but slaps just stung and were humiliating.

UUUGGHHH IT’S SO MELODRAMATIC JUST STOP

So the mother is neglectful, abusive, and brings home strange men. This is also another part of the sue’s tragic past, as the man that the sue’s mom is with in particular, Stan, is apparently a big creeper towards Dialla and attempts to rape her at one point. She gets away, locks herself in her room, tries to call the police, drops the phone, AND THEN PROCCEDS TO JUST SIT DOWN AND DRAW HER FIREND’S NiGHTS OC LIKE NOTHING HAPPENED. It never affects her, NOT ONCE, throughout the rest of the fucking story and it is never mentioned again.

The sue’s school life is also annoyingly cliché. She has two friends that are literally walking anime stereotypes, Polly (the “perky and kawaii bubbly girl who’s all about fashion and is rich!!”) and Kitty (the “rebel, goth girl who’s emotionless and tells off the stupid preps!!”). And of course, what sue sob story would be complete without the generic bully preps! :

"Yeah, Dialla, where’s the dumpster you dug that outfit out of." A nasally voice chimed in. Standing there in all her puffed up vanity was Gigi Windsor and her posy giggling like morons. One of the followers stepped forward and without warning, tugged at Dialla’s magenta locks with her hand. "Look at this! Such a bold color!" She cried.

Gigi sniffed and turned her nose up. “Cici, don’t touch garbage, who knows where its been.” She flipped her dyed blonde locks.

Cici let go like she had touched poo. “Eeeew! Now I like have to wash my hands!” she wined and her twin sister Mimi consoled her.

Gigi stepped up and glared down at Dialla, she had a few inches on the other girl. “It’s bad enough to exist when no one wants you, your daddy left for a reason. Get a clue.” She smirked as Dialla’s eyes got wide and started to water, but wasn’t counting on the girl she had picked on for so long to grow a backbone.

The pink haired girl bristled and shoved Gigi away from her as hard as she could, causing the bully to fall back on her butt. “Don’t you dare talk bad about my dad, you… you… whore!” Living alone with her mother gave Dialla the special slut-detector.

Gigi’s eyes flared and she got to her feet then swung her hand. Her manicured nails were out for blood.

YAY WAY TO SLUT SHAME WOMEN WHO DRESS GIRLY SUETHOR

Mini rant here, I can’t STAND it when suethors do this. It’s petty, it’s snobby, and it doesn’t make us like your OC any better. Get over yourself.

Ahem, ANYWAY, so it turns out that the sue and both her friends are all NiGHTS fangirls, particularly the sue herself (remember this fact):

"By the way," Polly decided to change the subject and take their minds off the unpleasantness of high school. "I finally got the last issue!" Polly cried excitedly, taking a comic book out of her pack and then shoving it in Dialla’s face. "Sorry, I’m just so psyched that I have the complete set!"

"S’okay. Let me see!" Dialla, grateful for the change of topics, took the thin paperback out of her squealing friend’s hands. "Oh my gosh! This is it! Nights into Dreams 6th issue!" she exclaimed flipping madly through the comic, squealing and blushing at every part that showed a picture of Nights.

Yeah. The sue’s “admiration” gets progressively creepier:

Dialla was staring out the window at the clouds, daydreaming. She took pride in her ability to daydream. Unlike her night dreams which haven’t changed and where she lacks control, she was in her element. Sometimes it became so intense that she couldn’t see anything even though her eyes were open, she would fly, run, jump; but her body stayed still in her seat.

In this particular moment she was daydreaming about NiGHTS of course and she was flying with him through the clouds, laughing and smiling at each other. Suddenly, the nightmaren was in front of her. His marble blue eyes sparkled with love and untold secrets. She smiled back. Their faces drew closer and closer, he closed his eyes and she did the same.

Their lips-

Tap.

Dialla’s eyes snapped open when something hit her temple and she looked down to see a tiny pink paper airplane on her desk. Stupid Polly.

Unwrapping the paper she read the sparklely blue ink. ‘Dreaming about a certain purple horned cutie?’ she glanced at the sender and gave a sheepish grin that made Polly giggle. The blonde went back to taking notes in her pink fuzzy notebook.

Unbeknown to Dialla, Kitty was staring at her from her desk behind her. The bluenette’s eyes narrowed and she forced herself to look back at her sketchbook, where love poems written to NiGHTS took the place of math notes.

And creepier:

She sighed looking at another picture on her desk; it was a picture of herself and Nights together. She was so pathetic. Not only was she a die hard fan of a game hardly anyone plays, she actually dreams of him coming for her and rescuing her from this place.

Why she put so much faith in this imaginary being was simply because she loved him. Correction, she was madly in love with the purple jester… head over heels, couldn’t stop thinking about him, in love. She loved his care-free personality, how no matter how dire everything got he could still bring her joy. She wished on countless stars for him to come alive and be her boyfriend… maybe more. Yet no matter how hard she wished, it never came true.

And creepier:

She slammed the door shut and locked all seven locks then dead-bolted the door, and then shoved her dresser in front of the door. Once the barricade was up, she dove under the bed and sobbed, her fingers shook as she tried to punch in 9-1-1, but she dropped the phone when her door knob rattled and Stan pounded on the door, screaming at her and calling her all kinds of things.

Dialla moved back further under the bed, squeezing her eyes shut and attempted to day dream him gone. She daydreamed that NiGHTS came through her window and flew her out to safety, whispering that it was going to be alright, chanting her name over and over.

This chick’s crazy!!! Seriously, there’s liking a character and then there’s flat out obsession! If it’s affecting her so much that it’s also affecting her life, I think it’s time for a major reality check!

Anyway, the sue falls asleep, ends up in Nightmare, and gets saved by Reala. He takes her to Wizeman where he turns her into the above pic: a half human, half Nightmaren replacement for NiGHTS (who they also never stop comparing her to by the way) named DAiZ (yeah, DAiZ, so original). When asked for an explanation as to why her of all people, we get this:

"You will replace the one who betrayed me."

NiGHTS. “B-but why me?

"I have my reasons. From now on, your name is DAiZ."

BECAUSE REASONS. The suethor’s explanation for DAiZ being chosen is literally BECAUSE REASONS. Keep in mind that this also is never brought up again or questioned, she just accepts it. This sue is not only crazy, she’s also an idiot.

After she blindly just accepts her new enslavement, she walks around with Reala and gets to know him (this is told instead of shown mind you). He is completely OOC and is polite and courteous to her and even tells her of his super-secret plan to overthrow Wizeman (whom he is completely loyal to in the games) at some point and take over for himself. He just tells her this, like it’s no big deal! Also, remember all of that obsessive fangirling over NiGHTS that she did? How she went on and on about how he’s her ideal boyfriend? COMPLETELY FORGOTTEN, she just moves on to Reala:

Creepy! Creepy! Creepy! Creepy! Creepy! Creepy! Creepy! Creepy!

He’s kinda cute.

DAiZ shook her head, “Where did that come from?! Cute? He’s scary!

But a good scary. Her mind argued.

He gives me the creeps. She shot back.

Creeps? Or something more along the lines of nosebleeds? Her mind purred, if minds could even purr.

Gross… He looks like the lead mime from a circus slasher flick.

But a cute mime-

"Ahhh! SHUT UP!" She screamed.

Greeeaaaattt, a badly-written love triangle, that’s just what this story needs. The next three chapters after this is just useless filler dedicated to showing how happy the sue is now that’s she’s been kidnapped and becoming friends with practically all of the bosses in the entire game like they’re one big happy family or something. She’s also stated to be training throughout this period, which could be a great way to show her getting over a conflict that she is said to have at the beginning of her enslavement (she can’t fly), but it’s never gone into detail and is just once again told instead of shown. We never once see her make an attempt to try and fly, we’re just told that she’s been trying.

Whew! And that concludes Part 1 of my summary! I’ll get Part 2 uploaded once I’m done with it (Only one more chapter of horror left!).

Hope you enjoyed!

I found this while going through the anime RP tag.

I THOUGHT THE SASUKE’S SISTER FAD WAS OVER

|| HARATSUKI UCHIHA  ||  19  ||

Age: 19
Birthday: November 8th
Height: 5’5”
Weight: 55kg/121lbs
Eye colour: Dark purple
Hair colour: Black
Clothing: Black tank tops. But she has recently stopped
wearing them and now wears whatever is in fashion. She
likes to wear Kimono’s as a sign of tradition. Other than that,
she doesn’t wear anything specific.

Haratsuki was born a year later after Itachi. They grew up together and cherished every moment they shared. By now, she was a Jounin and his older brother was part of the anbu. 
She packed her things and headed there to not only take a long trip away from her clan just to learn more about the Land of The Moon that she fell in love with when she found out about it. But when she came back, she found her family have died. Bear in mind that she left when Sasuke was just born. 
She hid and watched Itachi confront Sasuke. Before she could find out what happened afterwards, she fled. 

Now, she lives in Getsugakure. Located in the Land of The Moon. 
Although she does take visits to Konohagakure and other villages as she
likes to travel.

✓Positive traits 
Protective, independent, calm, courteous, honest, hardworking, friendly, 
kind (once she gets to know you better)

✘Negative traits 
Self-pity, manipulative, jealous, quick-temper, tsundere, mysterious, pessimistic, sad (more often than not)

Abilities/Career:

Former Anbu who has been reassigned as a Jonin.

Mangekyo Sharingan: Only recently learnt. Because of this,
her eyes will often bleed as a side effect. (The design for
her Sharingan is under development.)

Great Fireball Technique: A technique that most if not all
of the Uchiha clan know how to do. Even just by observation.

Manipulating Windmill Triple Blades: Strings attached to Kunai.
Similar to the concept of puppet strings. Only one kunai is used
to cause damage and the other two as decoys.

Uchiha Flame Formation: Used as a barrier/defense technique. 


Dance of the Crescent Moon: Two clones are made as to confuse the
victim of which one to attack. 

Hazy Moon Night: Basic sword attack but puts the opponent into 
a daze afterwards. Although when she taught this, she did not know
it was already a technique - as she already learnt this herself - and 
thus called it “Swift Sword”. But her instructor tells her to name it it’s
original name.

Shurikenjutsu: The throwing of blades.

Haratsuki was taught how to use weaponry and the art of the involvement
of the moon in her jutsu. She has also been taught fire related abilities.
But more often than not, she’d taught herself other techniques and is known in the village she lives in as making up her own.

alright so…

recently, someone i watch on deviantART has been posting a comic involving canon characters, and her own OC, which is fine… except for the way she has her character.

to start off, this is a professor layton OC who’s name is wolf. yes. wolf. 

and of course, like all good sues, she has a thing going on with descole. she is apparently (because of this comic) now his ‘partner’ as in partner in crime. she was his apprentice, like luke is to the professor, but more of crime stuff.

you know what descole has? wolves. so why not name her wolf, because i dunno that makes perfect sense

anyway, she’s pretty annoying and her creator had her name as ‘erin’ something and also ‘alana’ and i am so confused on what her real name is.

also, before i actually get into my point about why she is a giant sue, i would also like to mention that the descole x wolf shipping is hinted at almost all the time, and wolf (like all the descole x oc sues) is only around 18-early 20s while descole (albeit he doesn’t look it) is early forties.

into what the problems.

in her most recent comic, wolf and descole and the butler (i think his name was raymond but i dont remember off the top of my head so i’ll just call him butler) are pretty like ‘let’s go after bronev’. the one character that everyone hated because HE HAS TOUCHED OUR PRECIOUS DESCOLE SO HE MUST PARISH

and of course, bronev is like ‘ayyyy’ and huge fight. wolf pretty much went ‘screw this’ and ran after bronev, and after descole and raymond move their slow asses to go get her, she’s been beat up by bronev. THIS is where the problems come in. (also would like to say, i would provide visuals but im posting this from my laptop which can’t really do much, but it’s actually decent art and it’s okay but the story went south.) bronev has a sword (he is not one of the only men in the series that uses a sword, by the way) and commence sword fight with descole, when bronev could have easier shot him and the butler, and wolf but no we must let them live. long story short, descole almost dies when wolf valiently sacrifices herself to save him and actually almost dies doing so

like this hasn’t happened plenty of times before with other sues

and then descoles pretty much going to try and avenge her death when, WHOOP-DE-DOO SHE’S NOT DEAD

WHO WOULD HAVE GUESSED IT

also would like to mention the fact that she got cut in the abdomen with a sword. a SWORD. and she lived through it.

so p much the butler’s like “shes alive” and they escape and a week later she wakes up and descole going in to see her and he was actually the reason she woke up bc of that one tear, and there’s the fact she’s not wearing a hospital gown because no, we must have bandaged boobs. hospitals gowns mean no fanservice. we can’t have that.

and she almost kisses him until the freaking butler shows up and thank god because too much pedophilia.

my question is

how did she live through all of this especially a freaking SWORD

WHY DID BRONEV NOT KILL THEM WHEN HE HAD THE CHANCE

WHY DOES WOLF NOT HAVE A ‘DRIP’ (idk what it’s actually called) OR HOSPITAL GOWN OR ANYTHING ACCURATE TO BEING IN A HOSPITAL

so many unanswered questions and so many comments like

"im so happy she lived" "why didnt descole kill bronev for wolf" and stuff

ugh

My First Mary Sue

Ok so, when I was about seven or eight, my brother and I were introduced to the LEGO Bionicle toys and comic, which was basically about the Toa, robots with elemental powers, saving the world. There was a lot of lore and mythology to it, and I loved it to pieces. Naturally, I wanted to insert myself into such a fantastic story and made up a character to do just that. I didn’t write anything down or draw anything about her, possibly because I was embarrassed of her even then, likely because that would be work and I was a lazy little rugrat, so I’m just saying what I can remember.

Her name was Ashleya (My name with an ‘a’ on the end - so clever!). She was a human kid in a world with absolutely no humans or humanlike creatures to be found - though in fairness, at the time I didn’t see any evidence that the island the story took place on just didn’t have any humans on it, but there were humans elsewhere. She traveled around with the Toa on their very dangerous missions, despite being a kid, and all of them openly loved and doted on her like an adorable little sister, even though some of them have trouble expressing anything other than deep dislike to anyone.

She was absurdly powerful. She could copy anyone’s powers by thinking of them, though the only time I specifically remember her using it is one time she failed at it and everyone got their asses kicked like in canon.

Her story was the main antagonists of the arc where I got into the story were holding her prisoner, and she got free when the Toa were fighting them. There was no explanation for how where she came from or how she got her powers.

Also she could surf on lava.