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Hey, guys. Guess what.

Those flawless, beautiful characters. Everyone is in love with them.
We've all made them.
And they have some angsty terrible past.

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sues

pepsi loves you, love him back!

a lot of things about this really don’t make sense but I

I’ve decided to stop thinking about it

I’m here to confess the sins I committed when I was a middle school student. I was hooked on the Shugo Chara series (especially Ikuto) so much back then that I made this abomination.

In case if her bio is too small to read (sorry for the low quality. I had to use my phone camera because my scanner is broken), her name is Aniela Joaquin Yamagata. Her name sounds almost similar to mine, and Joaquin is my favourite name. Judging from her name, she is a self-insert.

She is Finnish-Japanese (I had no idea why I picked those nationalities) and she has blonde hair from her Finnish mom, black eyes from her Japanese dad. 

She transferred to Seiyo Gakuen at the age of 11. She had been living in Helsinki for a while, so moving to Japan SHOULD give her new cultural experience, and cultural shock too. However, she didn’t have to go through that phase because while living in Finland, she was taught by her father to speak Japanese.

She got her 3 Shugo Charas; Bianca (the nun-like one), Margareth (the science-like one), and Rose (the one with frilly dress and parasol) because she wanted to be smart, sweet, and elegant. Aniela herself is a quiet but cute person who never does anything right and always gets the blame thanks to her clumsiness. That’s why she wants to be noticed for her best self. She likes fashion and science. 

After transferring to Seiyo Gakuen, she instantly got accepted into Guardians because she had 3 Shugo Charas like Amu. After that, she made friends with everyone. I mean EVERYONE because she’s cute with her looks and accent. They let her clumsiness slide. She got the Two of Hearts role which was made up by me because all of the canons have taken up the major roles like Joker, Ace, Queen, King, and Jack.

I paired her with Ikuto. She met him while battling against Batsu Tamas with the rest of the Guardians. I have drawn her character change with each of her Shugo Charas, but… They are too OP.

She likes onigiri, full cream milk, and the color purple. Her sign is Taurus.

I feel miserable after finding this bio I had made long time ago, mostly because I have made such stupid Mary Sue like this without researching.

Hi, it’s the Persona Anon from before. I found another gem on dA. This OC is made by using TinierMe, a clone of Gaia.

This is what the bio says, according to the artist:

** I DID NOT USE A DRESS UP GAME TO MAKE THIS!! THIS IS FROM A SITE THATS LIKE GAIA SO, no I did not make this from a dress up game. they are my items that I bought and own from the site**

My second persona OC Amu.

Info:

Amu is a daughter of a high respected demon lord in the underworld. Her father wants her to follow his footsteps but she doesn’t want to. SHe hates the underworld and always sneaks up onto the surface to where is it full of life and mysterious things. Even love. // never forget her demon wings.

Personality:

Cute, childing, silly, joyful, clumzy, really kind and helpful, loves others, very stubborn and lazy at times.

Age: 15

The cat:

The cat name is Pucci(pronounced as Puuchi or Poochie)

The cat is a boy and he is Amu’s somewhat gaurdian. he is suppose to watch over her like a personal buttler. He transforms into a small or giant scythe depending on how determined amu is into fighting and how much she beleives in herself. His personality is well, he’s the type of person that would say “work first, fun later” or “stop playing around” he’s a no fun character lol.

Thouch Pucci used to be a boy once. A human boy that used to live with his mother and father. but he signed a deadly contract with Amu’s father to become a servant of his forever. Pucci signed it, not knowing how much he will miss his old life and will never forget about it.

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Judging from the scythe and the demon wings on the image, I thought it was a fanmade Persona. For those who are not familiar with Persona series, Personas are basically something that portrays a character’s inner self. Personas are usually based on mythological creatures or perhaps historical figures.

Well, turns out it’s a Persona user OC. Persona users are normally high school students. Having a companion pet and being the daughter of a demon makes no sense. At all. Nothing in the bio makes goddamn sense. The OC’s traits are sueish clichéd, the spelling seems to be neglected, and even everything about her kawaii (sarcasm intended) companion is not logical in terms of Persona fandom. 

Now, I know Hetalia does not have the best fan-reputation in general but…this is probably the worst one I’ve ever seen. I wish I could include more than one pic in a submission because she has pleeeeeenty of bad base-art in her DeviantART to showcase but the above one will do. I did once give her a polite critique on her DA and told her I think the OC has Mary Sue traits, her response was something like “Sorry you think she’s a sue, she does have some flaws” and listed things like trusting people too easily, naivete, not making up her mind, and “SHE HAS APARAGUSES.” 

I don’t know if the last counts as a flaw because she gave no visible or even mental signs of being troubled by “Aparaguses”. 

Please be aware the “Backstory” section below is literally a summarized version of the OC’s first fanfic. The fanfic itself had 3 chapters, all of which were ONE single, monstrous paragraph with the same standard of writing as seen in these below descriptions. She also VERY blatantly made every male canon character be in love with her/the self-insert/the OC and would skip no opportunities to remind us of this. 

- End submitter’s notes 

backstory Serenia’s human name is Kaitlyn-Amethyst.Water lily and originally age 15. the back story on her is that she was a girl from our world but was transported to the hetalia world by a unknown person. she was sent there after wishing to save the life of the holy roman empire only thinking that it’s only a wish that would be impossible to come ture. when her wish was granted she was knocked out and when she woke up she was a 15 year old girl in a four year old girls body. she was found by Austria and taken into his home to be looked after in exchange for her to be a maid along with Feliciano A.K.A Italy. she saved holy roman empire by lying to him saying she can see the future he bought it and was saved. she traveled across the land after staying at austria’s home for 210 years then leveing for he land, Serenia. on the way she met little romano and Spain, then went on to meeting Arthur A.K.A England and little Australia and little America. she went through hard what whit the bombing of her country, she abandoned her pasifistways and embraced the fighter spirit with open arms. when she when to look for survivors she found 2 wolf cubs and 2 snow tiger she took them in as her own. after she was in isolation for a short period of time but found bye her good old friend Australia and taken to a world meeting to find out which country bombed hers. finding out it was switzerland she made a threat for him to call off the war on her country, switzerland called off his troops, after that she joined the allies.

Kaitlyn is a strong willed girl with a kick ass adittude she can defend herself and protect others, however underneath her kick ass adittude she’s as soft as a rose petal. she loves every animal and is known in her own language, Serenian ‘nemara lillian hihn kiena’ to translate the angel of light. she is very friendly and can make friends fairly easly but, that’s depending on who the person is. she has the strength of russia and america put together when mad and/or needed to fight but the kindness and motherly additued when someone with a childs inoccents A.K.A italy. she cares for her friend like they were her own family

september 1st. since serenia was fonded on september 1st 1500  and because the country had beautiful flower and animals it was originally going to be called ‘Gardenia’ however, the founder barnabey clay woth (made up person) traveled the area more he described it as a heavenly place thus calling it Serenia 

family brothers: Arthur, Alistor, Jack, Cole and Peter Kirkland

pets

her pets were the 2 wolf and 2 snow tiger cubs:

Kilala: the white female wolf with a black cresent moon birthmark in the middle of her forhead andamber eyes.

Nomura: the black male wolf with emerald green eyes.

Herona: the male snow tiger with silver eyes.

Sesa: a black female snow tiger with white strips, a white cresent moon birthmark in the middle of her forhead

however, after the pictonians she lost the pets to them and later rescued a stary cat with dark brown fur and brown eyes. Kaitlyn calls her little angel but, the other cats know her as Serenicat.

extra informaion

Serenia can preform magic like her brother, Arthur and can see magical creatures.

serenia can’t decied who she is in love with but maybe in love with a 2p. her eyes turn emerald green like her brothers when she is in full rage using her magic and/or using her magic at maximum power

her magic comes out in a white glow hence why she is called the angel of light.

she is part of  one of her countryies myths about a spirit of light and a child who was found in a blue flower, apparently she was the child.

I feel okay bringing this OC to the public eye because I offerred her con-crit in a huuuge FF review once but she blatantly ignored me and kept putting out chapters and fanarts of hilarious bullshit. 

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Serenia

serenia is a country made up by (name withheld).

backstory Serenia’s human name is Kaitlyn-Amethyst.Water lily and originally age 15. the back story on her is that she was a girl from our world but was transported to the hetalia world by a unknown person. she was sent there after wishing to save the life of the holy roman empire only thinking that it’s only a wish that would be impossible to come ture. when her wish was granted she was knocked out and when she woke up she was a 15 year old girl in a four year old girls body. she was found by Austria and taken into his home to be looked after in exchange for her to be a maid along with Feliciano A.K.A Italy. she saved holy roman empire by lying to him saying she can see the future he bought it and was saved. she traveled across the land after staying at austria’s home for 210 years then leveing for he land, Serenia. on the way she met little romano and Spain, then went on to meeting Arthur A.K.A England and little Australia and little America. she went through hard what whit the bombing of her country, she abandoned her pasifistways and embraced the fighter spirit with open arms. when she when to look for survivors she found 2 wolf cubs and 2 snow tiger she took them in as her own. after she was in isolation for a short period of time but found bye her good old friend Australia and taken to a world meeting to find out which country bombed hers. finding out it was switzerland she made a threat for him to call off the war on her country, switzerland called off his troops, after that she joined the allies.

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this is an entirely different person from the rainbow-eyed freezer Sue I submitted the day before. apparently rainbow eyes from torture is a thing now.

      so, yes, this is a simply doodle thingie, my OC for Free! AS I REALLY WANTED TO RP so here are some infos abotu her: 



Name: Seiji Kentaro

Age: 17


Height: 160 cm


Weight: 40 kg lol idk


Hair Color: a weird mix of blue


Eyes Color: blue


Birthday: October 31


Blood Type: 0


Occupation: 2nd year student at Iwatobi High School


LOVU INTERRRESSTUUU: Rin Matsuoka-san-chan ; D 


Relatives: oh she just has a simply family, k? a mommy, daddy; she lives alone though, her parents are working abroad

Friends:.Misaki-chan, and ofc Haru, Nagisa, Makoto, Rei (ohgod she likes to tease him so much), KINDA RIN cuz he’s a grumpy cat ♥ Kasumi and  Masami!


Personality: she’s a wild, charismatic, lil’ agressive independent girl~ she really has a spiky tongue, thus always says honestly what’s on her mind and often gets in fights bc of it but doesn’t fight back cuz she’s a big coward (Seiji really 

loves horror movies, creepy, supernatural things; she loves the feeling of fear and adrenaline but still is afraid of it). She’s just crazy, it’s hard to predict what’s her next move. Despite of that she cares about her friends and seeks for affection, thus she hugs a lot. Complicated ._. )’ 

The most important info about her is that she’s a dirty piggie and lives in a mess… kinda. She doesn’t care about order and is used to live in dirt. I wouldn’t be suprised if they visit her someday and get lost in her room *facepalm*

She often get’s carried away by food… She really eats whenever she has the chance to it!


Appearance: I’ll just write a little about her style - it’s kinda mixed~ urm, a SPORTY-VINTAGE type I would say. Like she loves to wear baggy jeans, shorts, kinda oversized t-shirts with funny/abstract patterns, sneakers, twiggy pullovers~ She kinda tries to wear skirts and dresses also, but often gets mad at herself because she finds it looks super ugly on her and then ends up depressed ._. ) 

Biography: Since it’s a simply swimming anime I really had no choice as to make my OC know them in her childhood. I think it can be like this, that she met them on their tournament and might get a bit excited about how they were swimming (maybe she could admire swimmer in tv too) and urm… I think, that she would totally talk to them then:

Seiji: YOU WERE TOTALLY EXTREMLY SO COOL BACK THERE! L-LIKE OLIMPIC SWIMMERS, NU, LIKE FISHES-


Rin: IKR?! I’m telling ya, I’ll become an olimpic swimmer someday! 

Makoto: Haha, yes, we totally hope that! 

Seiji: GODSH GODHSH- Swimming looks so badass! Urm-urm, I love it! 

Haru: *sparkle sparkle eyes*

Nagisa: That’s great! You should swim too then! It woul-

Seiji: I DON’T KNOW HOW TO :3 

They: ._________. ) 

Haru: *his heart nearly exploded* You need help. 


So I think they could teach her, ya know .___. ) I mean, why not? Rin might get really into this and try to teach her the best he could manage - he proposed a rock, scissors, paper game to decide who’ll teach her xD and when they were too busy with that Haru already was explaining her the basics, lmao. At the same time I think Rin might have developed lil’ feelings for Seiji, they were young so I see no problems… (¬、¬) Soooo… they were all close with each other etc, Rin unfortunately had to leave, everyone were sad. AND OF COURSE Seiji still tried to keep up their friendship throught sms’ing and things, but one day he suddenly stopped writing her back. 

The day when Haru & Co. were talking about Rin’s comeback Seiji was totally suprised and sad: that from what they said he changed a lot, she finally can TRY to see him but at the same time it was dissapointing he didn’t tell them about his arrival. And the day they finally met would be an accident in the city, when she bumped him on the street and smashed a hamburger on his back… SO THEY OFC GOT ALL MAD, CUZ HE YELLED AT HER AND THEN HER ARROGANT SELF CAME UP ETC, ETC until suddenly:


Rin: … Seiji? (;¬д¬)

Seiji: … RIN?! -chan (´⊙ω⊙`)!


and idk, he would still be mad and lecture her that wtf were she thinking and WTF IS THAT -CHAN SUPPOSED TO MEAN, she can consider herself as lucky that he won’t make her pay or whatever k? - “wow, what a relief… ” - she thought. 

I’m too lazy to write more about that, later she would try to message him but he ignored her calls (OH YES THANK YOU RIN-CHAN) I think, I really think that he could urm try to treat her a bit softer (?) bcuz he had a lil crush on her idk (-’๏_๏’-) Hrm, the cutest part in their relation is probably this, that Seiji 

STILL has and uses his swimming goggles from their childhood. Bc as I said they teached her how to swim, one day she would forget her goggles and yup, Rin borrowed her his~ 

She totally would help the guyz in creating the new swim club and even suggested to strip, but they stopped her, ohgod why is she so embarassing? 


Seiji: OK, WE HAVE NO CHOICE THEN. 

Makoto: Huh-?

Seiji: *puts the jacket away*

Makoto: GOD NO! WE STILL HAVE OTHER IDEAS! 

Seiji: YOU TWO WANTED AMAKATA-SENSEI TO WEAR A SWIMSUIT >:C 

Makoto: Oh, well this is… 

Nagisa: It’s not that we-

Shinji: *continues*

Both of them: *jumps on her* STOP IT.


HER ANIMAL IS A SEAL 

OK? ok. I don’t want to make her a pro swimmer, she just loves it~ she isn’t bad in it either; 


her signature stroke is just freestyle - front crawl ._. ) 

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Not sure if this was already posted, but if it is, you could remove it.

Misaki-chan, Kasumi and Masami are her friend’s OCs, but I removed the link to their accounts because I don’t want to expose them. I want to point out her spelling and how Seiji turned into Shinji. 

"Since it’s a simply swimming anime I really had no choice as to make my OC know them in her childhood."

No choice? I’m sure they had a choice whether to do it or not. I mean, Rei wasn’t a childhood friend of the group.

Name - saria neti (if u get those reffrances u win a cookie)
Age- 16
Gender -f
What u can do w/ your elements-( plz be creative w/ this one) semi plant giving her the abiletty 2 ‘tallk’ to them, change the shape of her body at will and blast devestating blasts of absorbed solar energy (pokemon,solar beam)
she looks mostley human but with vines instead of hair and she blushes green (coz she has sap nt blood)
Personality- playfull friendly (sort of flirty i guess)
History- had an odd affinity with plants from a young age finding out she could controll them sumwat at age 14 she wanted 2 controll them compleatly eventully causing her to meld with them
she ran away scared of wat she’d done 2 herself her odd apearance led to her needing to steal to get food at 15 she was caught stealing from thugs they dragged her in2 an apartment block and hacked off her vines causing her to scream as they were tecnicly like extra limbs eventully she lost it and inadvertantly destroyed the biulding her still inside
she staggerd from the wrekage 2 days l8er with no idere were she was her past or wat happend to the biulding she eventully wound up were u guys r (sry >.< im new) and just practices her powers
Other - hates ppl pulling her ‘hair’ or asking y she blushes green
aperance:
man dat pic took forever sry bout the skechyness     

Ladies, Gentleman, and those of Neutral sophistication, My first roleplay character

Name - luna black
Age- 16
Gender - f
Appearnce- i drew this (removed)
What u can do w/ your elements-( plz be creative w/ this one) can controll and bend shadows turning them in2 objects or monsters has horns that make her able 2 read minds, shadow/beast form she has other abilatys but doesent kno of them
Personality-shy can be rude tho h8s talking about her past
History- mother was murderd by a theif when she was 5 at that time she was also stabbed with a cursed dagger holding an evil spirit. the spirit made a deal with her to send her 2 her mother in heaven but luna had 2 kill ppl for their souls what fed the spirit. after that raised by her very religios farther strict so when her abilitys emerged giving her devil-ish horns he belived that she’d been possesed by satan and tryed to stab her she freaked her powers creating a oposing dagger that killed him. since the spirit wad raised her 2 be a killer
Other - wers a black ribon round her neck in memory of her mother possesed by a shadow deamon she calls “thing” & plays guitar     

Dolls, Dudes, and those of neutral companionship, I give you My SECOND ever rp character

"flame i hate being pregnant this is so not cool i love my boyfriend but how is i m going to take care of all of my babys it s to much i no i want it some kid s but still i hate being pregnant!!!" 

wut.. So this kid thinks their oc is real and that she can kill everyone in the world. As a bonus this kid also steals art and recolors it for there lil sue her

Some Naruto OC

So, I was searching up some Aika Village from Animal Crossing fanart and this is what I came upon…

(before I start the bio I just wanna mention that her neck is not SO THIN it's just her curly hair covering it XDDD Thankies hope you think this will be the most Sugoi charrie XDD)  Name: Aika Kurai Birthday: April 7  Gender: Girl Age: 16 Height: 5’1” Weight: light as a feather Blood Type: AB Kekkei Genkai: Byakugan Affiliation: Akatsuki Team: Itachi Clan: Kurai  Ninja Rank: S rank Registration Number: none Graduation Age: Didn't graduate Chuunin Promotion Age: 11 Jounin Promotion Age: 13   Family:   Father : unknown  Mother: Mrs Haruno (Sakura's mom)  Little sister: Sakura Haruno Jutsu: medical Ninjutsu, many chakra related attacks.  Tools: Suriken, Kunai, katana, six shooter, Uzi, bow and arrows, chainsaw mace, guillotine, Iron maiden, one of those spiky metal chairs you heat up, and a bronze bull.  Background:   Aika was Mrs Haruno's first kid when she was young but soon after birth her father found out she had a tailed demon i her and took her away so she would never find out. Aika was raised all the way on the other side of the world in Texas by her dad until she was ten. She was hording her dad's cattle one day when a rattle snake made them scared and stampede towards her dad crushing him in their hooves. before he died he told her about her mother which he had lied was dead. Aika entered in a deep depression and had nightmares thinking she was responsible for his death. Soon one of her neighbors hearing her cries of deep sorrow he took her in and treated her like a worthless slave beating her and making her do hard chores and took all her cattle. One day he tried to rape because he was a pedo her but her demon emerged and killed him brutally. she knew she was gonna be hung for that so she sold all the cattle and with the money she went back to Konoha where she was less than welcome by her mother. She was depressed again seeing that her momma now had a family with a little girl she constantly pampered. She hated Sakura right off the bat for having her mom's affections since birth and loved to make her life hell. She would make fun of her even after they forehead joked ceased making their parents have to punish her allot which only fueled her hate for her little sister. When she saw her Sakura's crush for Sasuke She started training hard to impress him even if he was way younger than her. She joined the exams and passed with flying colors at only eleven and then at thirteen she was already a Jounin. Her first crush was Kabuto when She saw him at his little sister's exam where she was supervising (she was 14 at th time) but she quickly got over him since she realized he was a four eyed creep. Soon after he battle against Orochimaru She ran away from home sick and tired of Sakura being the center of attention and saw Itachi and Kisame when they entered the village. she followed them for a while had to stop when a heard of cattle belonging to some rich lord stampeded towards Itachi. she saw him just sit there and feeling sorry she roped him and pulled him out of the way. She kinda liked him even if he looked like trouble. Itachi realized she had a tailed Demon in her more powerful that Naruto and ordered Kisame to catch her but she shot him in the shoulder with her dad's pistol and turned to Itachi offering to come with if they didn't kill her. he accepted and as soon as she was brought to the Akatsuki she was admitted in. she has lived there ever since and she's in a relation with her Ita-kun and she's nicknamed the Akatsuki six shooter (kinda like konan is the angel but they're not friends) !!!   Personality: She's nice to Itachi but she hated everyone else calling them snakes in the grass horn toads and yellow bely coyotes but deep down she's actually scared to reach out to others since itachi was the frst really nice person to her after her dad died.  Appearance: She is a petite girl only 5’1” with curves in all the right places D cup breasts and curves in all the right places. She has ivory skin which glows a light golden tan in the sunlight and Gold curly hair that reaches just below her curvy ass when straightened. her eyes are a beautiful sky blue sparking like the most expensive diamonds and framed by her cherry pink eyelashes which she go from her mother. her lips are plump and round their natural color is a deep pink but she always wears lip gloss. she has a long tail the fur matches her golden hair and has acid green tips to show off she's poisonous and when her inner demon emerges her wings become huge and bony.  If she's on mission she wears a cancan girl outfit under a female version of the Akatsuki robe and black cowgirl boots. Instad of the hat she wears her three feather pink hairclip.   When She's at the base she wears pink girly shirts see through to give her itakun some eyecandy, (even though the rest of the men give her hungry looks) short jean shorts and red cowgirl boots. She's really a girly girl despite being raised by her daddy. She also liked to walk in the halls in her underwear in the morning which is always red cause she knows itachi likes that color X3  Abilities:  Ninjutsu: She is a self taught medical ninja with powers as great as Tsunade's.  Genjutsu: She's learned all there is to know about it from itachi and she can resist even the strongest mangekyo Taijutsu: She's spied on Gai enough to learn it and now she's at the same level if not even higher than Rock Lee. (Unique Fighting Styles / Techniques) Summoning Technique : She can summon a giant bull and a zombie lion with a blue mane. (Kekkei Genkai)  Intelligence: She's not the sharpest knife in the core but she makes up for in in being hypnotizing sexy.  Stats: (0/5)  Part 1 Ninjutsu 4 Taijutsu 2 Genjutsu 1 Intelligence 3 Strength 4 Speed 5 Stamina 5 Hand Seals 4  Part 2 Ninjutsu 5 Taijutsu 5 Genjutsu 6 Intelligence 4 Strength 5 Speed 5 Stamina 5 Hand Seals 5  Part 1: 28  Part 2: 40   Quotes:  Get back here ya yellowbelly!  I don't need you bunch of varments and horn toads!  Hey Ita-kun what say we fo' a lille roll in da hey   But I always look like this. Dont-cha want you little rattle snake looking sexy?   I dress like a showgirl but I'm no pussy for hire varment!  How do I look in these boot shorts ita-kun  comeére my little desert weasel

The description is as follows:

(before I start the bio I just wanna mention that her neck is not SO THIN it’s just her curly hair covering it XDDD Thankies hope you think this will be the most Sugoi charrie XDD)


Name: Aika Kurai
Birthday: April 7 
Gender: Girl
Age: 16
Height: 5’1”
Weight: light as a feather
Blood Type: AB
Kekkei Genkai: Byakugan
Affiliation: Akatsuki
Team: Itachi
Clan: Kurai

Ninja Rank: S rank
Registration Number: none
Graduation Age: Didn’t graduate
Chuunin Promotion Age: 11
Jounin Promotion Age: 13


Family: 

Father : unknown

Mother: Mrs Haruno (Sakura’s mom)

Little sister: Sakura Haruno
Jutsu: medical Ninjutsu, many chakra related attacks.

Tools: Suriken, Kunai, katana, six shooter, Uzi, bow and arrows, chainsaw mace, guillotine, Iron maiden, one of those spiky metal chairs you heat up, and a bronze bull.

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this is my version of glitch city from pokemon as a hetalia character


name: glitch city or glitchy ^^
age: 16
personalaty: crazy, happy and insaine at times 
she also twiches alot and talks with random numbers

glitch: h3ll0 my n4m3 iz g1itch *twiches*

So this was on deviantart, and eh, at first I was gonna let it go, but then I saw that someone gave a small critique like “Hetalia is about nations, her hair is a bit abnormal and doesn’t fit, everyone in Hetalia are humans, one glasses frame is impossible, she wouldn’t be able to communicate in numbers” and I’m just summarizing, but the critique was really good and nice and had valid points.

Then the artist just kinda blew up and ranted, and the critic responded apologetically and was pretty mature and explained they weren’t trying to be mean, but the artist just ranted again and was pretty much a bit of a jerk… Also she has a few self-inserts and child of Italy I believe, but I think this was the weirdest one worth being here.

Name- Monalisa O’Neil/Bradford 
Age- Fifteen
Power- Ninjutsu Expert  
Race- Caucasian
Nickname- Lisa
Love Interest- Raphael 
Eye Color- Green
Hair Color- Brown But Is Commonly Dyed Red And Black  
Likes- Hanging Out With The Turtles, Kissing Raphael And Shopping With April Or Karai
Dislikes- Pizza
Actress- Crystal Reed
Friends- Casey Jones, Raphael, Leonardo, Donatello and Michelangelo 
Family- Chris Bradford (Father), Katie O’Neil (Mother), Kirby O’Neil (Uncle) and April O’Neil (Cousin).
Back Story:
Chris ment Lisa’s mother while he was visiting New York, they hit it off and started dating. Which eventually led to there daughter, Monalisa, Chris and Katie got married soon after her birth but got divorced when Lisa was six. Lisa was trained in the art of ninjutsu by her father and met her best friend Karai through her father, they stayed close even up to teen years. Lisa is gifted with photographic memory. At age ten Chris took Lisa on a tour to visit all the states and Tokyo. When Lisa was thirteen years old she was excepted into the foot clan and put her training to use, good or bad. After Lisa’s fifteenth birthday her cousin, April O’Neil, moved in with her and her mother because her father was kidnapped. Lisa met Raphael when he stormed of on his Sensai and brothers, truth be told they both needed a listening ear. Lisa, who was planning revenge on the turtles for mutating her father, weaseled her way into Raphael’s heart. When the secret get’s out Raph finally gives Lisa the tour to the layer in which she faints at first sight of Splinter. When Lisa get’s to go out with the boys to fight, they have to fight none other then Razzar causing Lisa to hide. Raph try’s to get her out from behind the dumpster, all she does is yell at him, making Razzar think one of the turtles is hurting his daughter, he simply charges and takes her away back to Shredder’s place. Lisa convinces her dad to work with her on her plan, and the turtles “Rescue” her from Razzar. Splinter knows about Lisa’s plans, and gives her these words of wisdom "Hate Is Like Drinking Poison And Expecting Someone Else To Die" Lisa who learns the true story about her father’s mutations and starts to truly like Raph, confesses about being apart of the foot clan. Raphael tells her to leave and feels as if she played him along. Lisa never comes back to the layer. Later when the Kraang put a explosive mutagen bomb on a boat in the east river, none of the boys know what to do when Lisa comes to help, she offer’s to drive the boat to a safe distance form the main land. As Lisa get’s on the boat she brushes a lizard away making the comment “I hate lizards” as she drives the boat off. The bomb goes off and everyone think she is dead when in truth she got mutated into the Monalisa we know and love. Lisa floats ashore missing and arm a few toes and her memory. She struggles to regain who she is as she finds her way back to the layer. She reaches the layer and the boys nurse her back to health and she regrows her arm (and toes) then she has to pick up the pieces of being a new person living in the sewer.

Not sure if I should put this under “OC” or not considering that it is an AU of a character from the 80s Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles into the new  Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles series. I think that it deviates from the original character so much that I might as well tag it as in OC.